Open Poetry #25 |
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Silver Moons Light |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL ![]() |
Silver Moons Light Picture of perfection, an angel of calling. So gracefuly you overwhelm me, taken over me. Reaching up to you i fall, deeper into your arms i crawl. A feeling of comfort wells up inside me As i stare into the silvery moon light. Your lovely....so lovely. All that you do engulfs me, surounds me, flows over me completely. I fall to my knees, at your mercy, i am wholly in the power of you. No way to protect myself against anything you do. I dont think you realize what i think of you. All that i could wish for in a girl i have found within you. I dont think you realize how much i care for you. All that i could hope for in a friend is inside of you. I dont think you realize what i would do for you. All that ive had has always been yours. Take you, dance under the silver moons light. Hold you, in my arms so close to my heart. Watch you, as your eyes sparkle under the starlite sky. And just maybe we will never have to say goodbye. Dance with you under that silvery mooned sky, i kiss you one last time. One last time before, i have to say good bye. A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, [This message has been edited by sellout007 (02-16-2003 04:47 AM).] |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok...this is soft sweet and romantic....enjoyed this very much! ![]() |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
I must agree with SEA (hey that rhymes..hehe) the poem was quite romantic. it was greatly enjoyed! Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
sellout007 - enjoyed reading this... BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ditto to all of the above replies! And I will add that it was a delight to read!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Thank you very much sellout007. I'm very pleased that you enjoyed my poem and I'm flattered by your other compliment *shy blush*. After reading this poem again, I enjoy it even more! Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful and romantic. Softly surrendering .... Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bittersweet write |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
SEA / Bill / Sunnyone / Margherita ~ Im glad you all enjoyed it. The post has fullfiled its purpose! And thank you all for the reply letting me know it is being read. Dragon Mistress ~ Im glad you enjoyed it too. And i did enjoy your poem, very much so, and im always willing to give out a compliment where it is rightly deserved. o) passing - Bittersweet - the story of my life! Thanks for the reply! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, [This message has been edited by sellout007 (02-15-2003 06:24 PM).] |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
adding to library A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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