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god woke me with his laughter |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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today again I talked to God about you and how I feel born again now like the first time and how our adultery is a blessing that makes me believe in heaven again I know he knows you have seen him looking at your eyes and your walk ways have heard him talk to the flowers about your perfume and how they could do better he gave me a gift of dreams that never let me touch you I was free to watch and stand outside where you had your back to me and didn't even know I was there except you felt me like you had known me once before somewhere and always wondered whatever happened when I went away and didn't come back or write God woke me with his laughter before you ever met me... ©Dark |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"he gave me a gift of dreams that never let me touch you I was free to watch and stand outside where you had your back to me and didn't even know I was there except you felt me like you had known me once before somewhere and always wondered whatever happened when I went away and didn't come back or write God woke me with his laughter before you ever met me... " D, your writing amazes me.... completely. and this part here, goes deeper than any words I have... saving this.... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
DS~ It is amazing the gifts that life can bring, and how some touch us so differenty then others..(of course)..... I continue to watch as the raven flies over my soul, and deems the words that bring us poetry....softer touches...ya know I enjoy this....  Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS This came from a truth place where sometimes words have their way Well done! [This message has been edited by Martie (02-26-2002 12:09 PM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I believe you have wakened a place deep within us all. Except your voice and your verse just expresses the soul of it better than I could possibly say. Spirit words D...touching and very loving. Sincerely, Regina |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
gift of dreams offer new vision for jaded eyes belief in the heart Who knows why some people cross our life path... whether this life or a previous one. But I think we sense them when they do. Insightful and heartfelt, DS. Loved this... Indigo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is fantastic. without going into detail, let's just say I can relate. This is a keeper for me! Bravo, my friend!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
he gave me a gift of dreams that never let me touch you I was free to watch and stand outside where you had your back to me and didn't even know I was there except you felt me Nice touch in this phrase~ some things we just know and never feel ... likewise some things we feel but never know the way they touch another. Always a good write from you DS. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark, I understand this. It touches me some place deep within my soul. Excellent write! Enjoyed, and I'm keeping this! ~Hugs and Sighs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA, a place in the heart feels things that our hands don't recognize thank you for your eyes here Lauren, ravens are white sometimes when they fly close to the sun thank you Ms Martie, truth places are recognized by true place eyes, thank you for yours Rwood, spirit words, we share them sometimes we say them without our voices I appreciate you here Indigo ms your eyes on the word voices are a gift of dreams, thank you for your eyes Serenity, we are one when you relate to the images of our souls, we are one then thank you so much Lori, when we just know it from feelings, it is a thousand words better than one word thank you so much |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I'm glad that I decided to look through your archive of poems....I relate to this and am in love with this poem. You're fast becoming one of my favourite poets at Passions...you have such a rare talent. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I was tempted tonight to go diving in your archives and found such incredible treasures!! Outstanding work. Take the bow of my heart. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms honeybee, thank you __________ ms mar, transparent seams would be heavenly thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: You write truth well enough... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...wish you were here in the warm..thanks babe |
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