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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2002-02-25 03:39 PM

a leaf
(floats)
on the water

and I
(s
t
a
n
d)
on the bank

watching
it go
(d
o
w
n)
the river

I can only
(won
der)

what it
would be
like
to
fol (leaf)
(leaf) low

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (02-25-2002 03:40 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-02-25 03:43 PM

nice form... I enjoyed!!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-02-25 03:47 PM

Sven - this is neat!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2002-02-25 03:47 PM

this is wonderful and i am always so happy to see you...helen

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2002-02-25 04:44 PM

Well, its good to see you around. Where have you been hiding?

Loved this..its totally you.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

5 posted 2002-02-25 04:50 PM

I too wonder Sven.....

A peaceful piece, one that made me think!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-02-25 05:06 PM

I think it would be very peaceful....lovely dear friend...

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

7 posted 2002-02-25 06:23 PM

Hi Sven it’s Krissy (Mushy’s daughter) she said you were one of her oldest friends on site. Not meaning you’re old, but oh well,…..you know what I mean I’m sure

This is lovely so peaceful and dreamy like drifting into night resting in the arms of a dream. Really beautiful image this is, very well written.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-02-25 06:26 PM

Oh GR8 Voice of the Northland how well you weave these pieces together!

Leaf Erickson?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-02-25 06:36 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Ooohhhhh...this is soooooo smooth and beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always bring such sights of nature to all our eyes wonderfully! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a fabulous vision! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, gthank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-02-25 09:09 PM

Sven - your heart is speaking and I can feel it my friend. Nice write...

BC

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-02-25 09:11 PM

Playing with my mind again...hope things are well...

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

12 posted 2002-02-25 10:20 PM

Very imaginative, Sven!

Cor

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

13 posted 2002-02-25 11:39 PM

I have followed a leaf down the river..but not in the water...it mesmerizes you

~A~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2002-02-26 11:52 AM

This is great..very cool presentation. Makes me feel like I am really following it with you.
Sandra

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2002-02-26 12:57 PM

CpatHair, thank you my friend. . .

Nightshade, thanks. . . glad that you liked it. . .

helen, thank you, and I am always glad to see you as well my friend. . .

Temptress, where have I been hiding??  Well, I've been right here. . . where have you been??  Thank you. . .

Irie!!!  It's good to see you again my friend. . . hope that all is well with you. . . and I'm glad that I could make you think. . .

Lauren, I think that it would be peaceful as well. . . thank you. . .

Krissy, well, you'll just have to thank your Mum for calling me old LOL

. . . thank you for reading. . .

Interloper, well Great Voice of the Southland, I wouldn't call it Erickson, "Leaf" Garrett on the other hand. . . LOL

Noah, thank you my friend. . . as always. . .

BC, thank you. . . then I've done my job my friend. . .

Sunshine, it's one of my favorite pasttimes. . .

all is well my friend. . .

Cor, thank you. . . just my mind wandering again. . .

Alice, indeed it does. . . but, I'm wondering if I would want to follow it to the sea?? Thank you. . .

Sandra, that's what I was going for here. . . thank you for noticing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

16 posted 2002-02-26 04:07 PM

I love it.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

17 posted 2002-02-26 04:09 PM

ditto all of the above, Sven...

loved this...

*smiles*

~Tier

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

18 posted 2002-02-26 05:32 PM

loved it,my friend

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

19 posted 2002-02-26 07:33 PM

Sven, very cool write here! Soothing to the soul as if you were really floating along. Great write as always!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

20 posted 2002-02-27 04:29 PM

walker, thank you. . .

Tier, I'll take that ditto my friend. . .

vandana, now I know that it's good. . .

Saunni, that's the idea. . . thank you for seeing it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

21 posted 2002-05-01 11:36 AM

i dig concrete poems, John...so glad i am to come across this one

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