Open Poetry #19 |
The Vessel Loneliness |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
At the heart of true joy there lies deepest sorrow The passage to bridge yesterday and tomorrow To ride the wave in, we must take the tide out On the sea of emotion, to be tossed all about As the heart to the fore takes the brunt of the force In the storm as in silence navigate of a course For the ship to come in, on a journey commence As the solitude heals of what love does expense While the numbness of pain radiates of the nerves In a singular focus finds the swelling and swerves To adjust and admire this craft we resist At the time as we heal, to recover what's missed Copyright Kkh 2/24/02 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) So very sad but true, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all who live in loneliness and I pray that in the heart of the sorrow new hope and joy is found! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This Diamond dear heart, this is a very well written and heartfelt poem. You show a lot of wisdom in this. Welcome to Passions As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A good deal of wisdom in this sprakling piece, diamond lady |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is so much wisdom in your words! Thank you for this, and *welcome* This was such a very nice poem to read!! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Yes, very wise. I so enjoy your work. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Welcome to PIP! Great, insightful write. BTW...love your critique message. Will look forward to reading more from you. |
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