Open Poetry #19 |
On Any Other Night |
PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Any Other Night On any other night the stars would climb into my lap feeling the points prickle and jab but tonight, o tonight they orbit ‘round your face arms spread wide in a great net to catch just the right plunging nova your luminous glow tugs at my passion with tireless gravity On any other night luna light would outshine its cousins but tonight, o tonight I can see only your radiance descending in peaceful lazy glimmers closing my eyes I make just one wish on a falling star [This message has been edited by PearlsB4Swine (02-22-2002 11:29 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Neat stuff |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love the ending....this is really wonderful |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Too cool! Beautiful write and I loved the title! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderful! May your wishes always come true! ((PearlsB4Swine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...what a night! What a write...well done...I enjoyed the imagery... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem. I hope your wish does come true. |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Ecrivan: and a neat reply, and a thank you! SEA: When you wish upon a star, dreams do come true! Sweet thanks. Saunni: How's Virginny these days? I couldn't decide on whether the title should have just been: On Any Other Night or Any Other Night...apparently both worked! That was a generous reply that made me smile broadly! TY, Saunni! Silver Streak: If Heavens will so bless me, then I will be so blessed. May you have a warm and enlightened day, Newell. Big smile for you! Sunshine: What a night; what a write! I like that, Sunshine! Your writing is always fresh and clever. Take good care and thank you! Smart Chick: as I also wish for your dreams to come true. That was very nice of you to say that, Smart Lady. Perhaps they will come true...you never know! To all of you, thanks so much! PB4S |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh how your words do shine! Very nice work dear poet. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Dazzlin'. I like....standing ovation kinda stuff!!!! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this was a cool write! The ending is great |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
PearlsB4Swine - beautiful write, love the words and the title... BC |
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