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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-02-24 07:57 AM

Gossamer Wings

Chasing images of my mind
Through all the terraces that bind
Through the bevel of bedevil
Through the hearts subsonic level

Can you feel the ghost of the deem?
Can you hear the sound of the scream?
Can you feel the wet of the dew?
Hear the set of the forming new.

Can your feet step one at a time?
And can you hear the bells that chime?
Can you stop everlasting chase?
Can you find the door of the place?

These are phantom of my alas
These are the demons along the pass.
This is the substance of my ID
This is the fire in the grid.

These are the phantoms fly my sky
With the gossamer wings of why

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-02-24 08:04 AM

In the sheen of gossamer wing
in the dew of footstep's spring
'neath the willow of all recall
is where I stand in silent stall

for I would read the words again
of the love you gave, and then
I would read them to inspire
all the poets to seek yet higher...

thank you Sy...
for the butterflies

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-02-24 08:10 AM

Sweet Sunshine,

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

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Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-02-24 08:13 AM

Sy,
for the fire of inspire
I give thanks from mire.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2002-02-24 08:51 AM

Sy,
your words always seem to inspire me.You have doen great once again.
Peaches

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-02-24 08:57 AM

yes, I hear the bells in chime ...
resonating from your wisdoms rhyme.
yes, I feel the day's dawning dew of new ...
each morn as the sun rises upon versed view of you.

yes, I know the path to the place ...
it's just beyond our minds entwined in trace.
I've no fear of ghostly screams of deem ...
I'm safe here in our rhyme scheme dreams.

Let those phantoms fly on by ...
the sky will sigh and they'll become butterflies.

*winkiewinkie*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-02-24 09:23 AM

Keth,
Good thought, thank you.

Sweet Peaches, Love your comment.

JM,
You always bring a smile to my face
And a wile of depart.
May the Budda's of Budda
Keep you a part.
Of the butterflies in my heart.
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-24 12:31 PM

YAY!!! I love butterflies so much, this is soooooo cute and your wonderful imagery makes the vision spectacular! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-24-2002 12:50 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-02-24 01:10 PM

Big thanks to you Noah.

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan

9 posted 2002-02-24 10:02 PM

I loved this one, Sy!

Can your feet step one at a time?
And can you hear the bells that chime?
Can you stop everlasting chase?
Can you find the door of the place?

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Tracey
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Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2002-02-24 10:14 PM

Well, you still write great poetry, even if a little rain does scare ya away from travelling!!! Lol. You missed a great day Sy.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

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11 posted 2002-02-24 10:58 PM

Nicely done, my fair-weather friend

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2002-02-25 01:20 AM

Oh this was a pretty one, and gossamer wings are my favorite things!

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

passing shadows
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13 posted 2002-02-25 01:31 AM

wow! not what I expected by the title and more awesome! what a nice surprise

rwood
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Tennessee

14 posted 2002-02-25 07:25 AM

Such a great verse. We all have those phantoms of periodic haunt..I try to make mine more afraid of me than I am them. LOL. Let your love fly..Sy!..love this!!

Sincerely,
Regina

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2002-02-25 07:57 AM

Lyra,

Sorry Tracey,
Spoke to Mike and in spite of the rain he had a good time. Maybe next time.

Balladeer,
That's me.

Passing Shadows,
Glad you enjoyed.

Rwood,
Love ya

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

16 posted 2002-02-25 09:06 AM

Very nice seymour and oh yes, there it is again, that ryhthm...lovely work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2002-02-25 09:16 AM

Floria,
Lovely response, thank you.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

18 posted 2002-10-20 02:41 PM

Seymour~
Dusting off these 'wings'
to my delight ...
they still take
poetic flight~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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