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Puppy Love (acrostic)
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Puppy Love (acrostic) |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Part of you is being taken Under a spell almost Passion makes you awaken Pulling the two of you close Young lovers Lighting up eachothers eyes One minute apart is a long time Velcro hearts inseparable Early teenage love, unforgettable |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (showers you in kisses) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love the velcro hearts imagery, your love makes me so happy and I love you so so much! (kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss) I will always love you so much, my sweet Joanna, you will always be the love of my life! (kiss on lips) Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderfully, penned, sweet Joanna. Makes an old dog want to be a young puppy again, LOL... ((Joanna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-23-2002 09:33 PM).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Joanna, this is neat. I especially liked, "Velro hearts" Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Interesting... I cannot do this.....I am not to be confined to such strictness! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Joanna sweetie! This is a wonderful acrostic! Love this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
makes me think of Pauls Anka's song..Puppy Love...nicely done hon..hugs ~Vic "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Joanna darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful, you are soooooooo good at these and this is perfectly wonderful. YOU have given my eyes a beautiful gift as always, thank you darling girl    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
I can relate to this! It's so true  Ruff! Bow Wow! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Velcro hearts inseparable" love that line great acrostic |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Yo've described this well.to be young and in love like this. Peaches |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so sweet!! As the others did, I too loved the velcro hearts line.  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Joanna, this is a wonderful acrostic. You got me smiling here ... I've always loved this phrase, and to see it described like this was just a delight. Very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The most sincere type of love, great poem. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
RosePetal, This is absolutely darling. It's cute and sensitive and I never saw the word 'velcro' in a poem before. Great job! Nan |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love this one!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Joanna hi there it's Krissy (Mushy’s daughter) This is absolutely wonderful piece of writing. You’ve done this acrostic beautifully, I’m in awe of anyone who can do these, well, anyone except my mum. That’s because she does lousy ones Whoops don’t tell her I said so. I see she’s already replied to this so I should be safe Can I just say I’ve watched yours and Noah’s romance develop and I think it is so wonderful you are both fine poets, may you both continue to be very happy  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
VERY VERY CUTE! I really loved this one, Joanna.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwww thank you everyone! These acrostics are so much fun to do, mainly because it's a bit challenging! Glad you all liked it. Hi Krissy! It is nice to meet you Mushy looks so young to have a daughter Thanks sweetie for your kind compliments (hugs) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Joanna...you did it perfectly...and it all fits, rhymes and makes total sense...Nice.. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!  Oh I love it...I love it...very well done...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Yes, love is a very powerful force, especially whien it is in the first puppy love state. This is beautifully written Joanna, great work of the expression of love. From your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Why do they call it puppy love when it feels more real than when you are older? This was a great acrostic Joanna, I enjoyed it. floria Floria |
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