Open Poetry #19 |
Good Morning My Love (Haiku) |
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Good morning my love Dreaming with you is better Than dreaming of you What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Moonlight Romeo - liked this much. Beautiful words... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice. I almost feel like I should not be reading these, they are just for Juliet. Sandra |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
together, we dream in the early morning light whispers....of last night |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Oh my gosh...did you ever say it right...dreams are wonderful but they cannot even touch reality....**big hugs** I am sure she loved waking up to you too... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever share the sweetest dreams with your love of your life! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet romeo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
evening Moonlight your stars whisper in my ears dreaming together "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet" [This message has been edited by Siofra (02-22-2002 01:26 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love your haiku! says a lot in few words [This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-22-2002 02:00 PM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful! I love this! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful..... very beautiful |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Yes I agree, and I love it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ditto! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sooooooo true... A sweet haiku always brings plenty of smiles out on us readers here... *~coco~* |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Thank you everyone My work thanks all of you too Night will come again What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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