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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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silence invaded our friendship beseiged by walls of tapes, we looked at everything else but each other was I too dense to receive your messages? were there any in the first place? |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
... and there is no sound if nobody is there to hear it. nice pondering |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's very sad when silence conquers a friendship... Well written. |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
so many unanswered questions... i know the feeling. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good! Very, very Good! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how I love these short ones that leave you thinking!! Good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Awwwwwww, this is soooo sad but well-written, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I pray that bliss will again fill your heart and your relationship will shine on and on! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanks for reading this ditty...the answers still remain elusive but somehow, i am more optimistic than before...i guess i should have faith in the friendship?? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: in poetry we find beauty in truths which are presented unlike in any other artform... these words speak volumes of truth, though unfortunate truth, and i thank you for phrasing them so succinctly wonderful writing! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is one of your best, my friend. Silence is not always golden, is it? I send you warm thoughts, and good wishes for a noisey year, in this, the year of the Horse. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you, doreen and Midnitesun for liking this so much..i have been suffering from writer's block and your generous compliments make me feel motivated to pick up my pen again.. thanx all |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
 bump |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This almost a senyru...it certainly has the feel of it...powerful message in a very few lines. It says it all! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Larry, you gave me a chuckle..thanks!  VAS, for some reason, i havent been inspired to write haikus/senryus these days..am very glad that you said that this has the feel of a senryu.. |
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