Calm Storms (Duet with Greeneyes)

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Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

0 posted 2002-02-16 06:36 PM

Greeneyes
&
Larry C

Was it in
your eyes I saw
what broke my heart?

A search for what we
wanted
a scent of the storm,
the evening flower
to take us to that
place, to bring us
to each other

The storm
of my errors
that saddened me
for miscalculated
intentions hurting
you accidentally
but yet

there was a passion still
in your eyes
a desire of longing
a tender touch
as you held my hand
knowing

this too
shall pass and
the stars will
shine again where
we will
celebrate
but until then

we will walk in the
memories of a love
deep in the heart
of us both
when we look back
always knowing…….

that reflections
give strength
to our future
building on our
past
commitments
of forever

time standing still
allowing this moment

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-16 06:43 PM

Oh Larry, Lauren how wonderful this is, and I can tell by your writing who wrote what verse, you both are good together, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-16 06:43 PM

BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may all the storms of exasperation fade away and may true love be rebuilt with bridges of understanding and commitment of strong love! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) We all love you so much, sweet friends, this is another fabulous duet of timeless merit! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Larry and Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-02-16 06:51 PM

Floria~

well he's a wonder to work with, thanks for the compliment....HUGS....

~~

Sweet Noah~

Thank you dear one, for all your loving replies in your vibrant colors....you are appreciated....

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-16-2002 06:52 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-02-16 07:03 PM

You make a terrific team...I hope to see more of your duets, Lauren and Larry, I applaud you both.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-16 07:07 PM

Lauren and Larry~This is exquisite!
The blending of words...done is such a way one could not tell who wrote what unless referring back to the top of the page.
Just amazing! Congrats you two!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2002-02-16 07:07 PM

Bravo....you two have done a wonderful job....excellent teamwork

Charisma

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2002-02-16 07:22 PM

Lauren,
Thank you so much for participating in posting reponses. It is a work of two. And if I am a wonder I am sure it is because you wonder why. LOL You are truly an amazing poet who continues to inspire me. Thank you.

Lyra,
Thank you for your ever postive posts and always with a graphic.

NancyLee,
Thank you so much. You are always so sweet.

Charisma,
We are glad you enjoyed. I always have fun writing with Lauren. Thanks.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2002-02-16 08:25 PM

you two write flawlessly together

very much enjoyed this

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-02-16 08:46 PM

Larry - you are great together. Wow, like this much...

BC

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-02-17 02:00 AM

SEA~

Well thank you, larry brings that out...I am so gald you enjoyed....thank you for taking time....

~~
Bill~

What a compliment, thank much my friend....

~~
Larry~

Thank you....for the writing, the fun, and the beauty of it all...

Love to all....Peace

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-17-2002 02:02 AM).]

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