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Nonsense Inspired
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Nonsense Yes, that’s what I need If I must need Anything Seems I must Seems I do Need to need Something true So, nonsense It shall be That keeps me from needing Truly needy things We’ll speak of it We’ll have a smile Sipping coffee all the while And if I should attempt To extract Anymore nonsense than that Throw a shot of rum in mine I’ll forget In record time |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay...I'll bite. laughing here, and I do understand! I relay nonsense, back to ya! evil me, lovely you... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, Everyone needs a lil nonsense sometimes  I like this  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Amazing what that shot of rum will do huh?? I like your nonsense…heck, do any of us make any sense!! Lol.  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh Duncan, I couldn't agree with you more, I think we all need some nonsense sometimes so we can have fun and embrace the world with a smile then wonder how we got here and where we are going suddenly! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cool,have one for me, will you? Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And if I should attempt To extract Anymore nonsense than that Throw a shot of rum in mine I'll forget In record time ========================== hmmm ... quite a deep piece of "nonsense" (reading between the lines of "needing") ... much to find here that makes perfect sense. I enjoy exploring the layers of your poetry ... succinctity of complexity *S* Should I be worried that your "nonsense" makes sense to me?  Hey...they told Dr. Seuss his rhymes were nonsense ... and look how that worked out   LOL"Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hey Duncan, I love the rum part. LOL. good exciting and interesting write. floria Floria |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
LOL!! Dor will love this one!!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh i LOVE this!! great little ditty friend duncan  hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have a need for nonsense? No if or ands or buts? If you don't mind my saying so Friend Duncan...that is nuts!! Not to think of real problems? Not to think of pain? Not to think of mounting bills? Hey, Duncan! That's insane!! You'd rather have some silly giggles? Rather have some fluff? Rather speak in gibberish And all that foolish stuff? You'd rather smile and say goodbye To all anxiety? The only thing that I can say Is, "Pour a cup for me!!!!"  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you know, Duncan, i have to tell you that i thought this little piece of whimsy was quite amusing, though i didn't understand it at all. Don't get me wrong, i really liked it a lot. As a matter of fact, I loved it!!!!see you at the cafe. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
And it better be a big bottle of rum, so we can all make "sense"  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - nonsense it is, I like that. Nonsense is nonsense, no more no less... BC |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Duncan-- Love your formula for stress relief. I'm going to e-mail it to a friend. Shenachie |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) Nonsense you say? Balderdash!! nicely done my friend... pour a cup for me, we'll go out and look for Iambe, let her fix that flat you had, and perhaps she'll take like to you and you can then tell her tales while I go off and find more rum. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* Cute, Duncan, very. ~Tier |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* we all need a little nonsense in our lives from time to time...*giggling* for me that would be most of the time...Wonderful writing, Duncan..I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how about a rum and coke? maybe share a joke a little nonsense goes a long way at the end of a very hard day enjoyed this Cowboy |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Call me nuts, the name is mine I like your nonsense just fine Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Duncan Hi there I liked this, but then I’m a nonsense type of girl. Yes an excellent write from you Well done  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
LOL I love it!! Especially the last two lines! Thanks for the read! Just don't fall in love with me and no one will get hurt |
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