Open Poetry #19 |
Poison Juice |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
An orange seems to be beautiful, only mold is sitting there. I tell myself it's alright, just by cutting it out. But a food is contaminated is done, No matter how hard I try it's still an orange with rotten mind and broken heart- its mind, its juice is poison. Eliza Simmons |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, Aries, this is really great. Excellent! A rotting orange...a rotting mind. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks hmm...I think I'm going to have some orange juice Eliza Simmons |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...I could use a glass of OJ myself! (sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I really, really like the message in this! There's much said here with few words. I have read this over and over and it hits me differently each time. Very well said! Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, hon, this is so intense! Excellent write |
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