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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-03-08 12:38 PM


An orange seems to be beautiful,
only mold is sitting there.
I tell myself it's alright,
just by cutting it out.
But a food is contaminated is done,
No matter how hard I try it's still an orange
with rotten mind and broken heart-
its mind, its juice is poison.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-08 01:50 PM


Wow, Aries, this is really great. Excellent! A rotting orange...a rotting mind.
aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2002-03-08 05:05 PM


thanks hmm...I think I'm going to have some orange juice

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

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3 posted 2002-03-08 09:55 PM




(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...I could use a glass of OJ myself! (sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-08 09:58 PM


Interesting...James
Honeybee
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5 posted 2002-03-08 09:59 PM



I really, really like the message in this!  There's much said here with few words.  I have read this over and over and it hits me differently each time.  Very well said!

Into my library this goes~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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6 posted 2002-03-08 11:41 PM


wow, hon, this is so intense! Excellent write
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