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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-02-19 11:53 PM

When You Took My Heart
~*Marge Tindal*~

Don't know what it...is about you, babe
that has completely taken my heart away
It feels so good when we are together
that I wanted a moment just to say
When you took hold of my heart
you got the beginnings of
the very best of me
I promise you
more my
love~

For my sweet Bill~
Gosh, I love you soooooo much~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-20 12:05 PM

romantic, sweet, and so beautifully said

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-02-20 12:07 PM

This was so sweet~
May you always end at the beginning.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-02-20 12:07 PM

The best of the best, I would add! Gotta say, love looks great on you, Marge!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-02-20 06:20 AM

This love is looking wonderful on you Marge. Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-02-20 10:10 AM

enjoyed

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-02-20 06:50 PM

Marge: You have a new love and a new granddaughter! Does your "cup runneth over?"

Betty Lou Hebert

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-02-20 06:53 PM

Marge~

This is inspiring....very lovely....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

8 posted 2002-02-20 07:20 PM

Marge; I loved this. It was so sweet; I hope he got a chance to read this poem. Wanda

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-02-20 07:32 PM

Margie girl darling sister of my soul’s heart How absolutely first rate is this, if this were a film I’d present it with an Oscar. If this were a record it would win record of the year. What is the equivalent of poem of the year? Well, whatever it is this deserves it

You know i love this right? Good i do it's wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2002-02-20 07:39 PM

Marge, this is so sweet. I am so happy that you found your true love.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-02-20 10:02 PM

He's a Keeper, isn't he?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2002-02-20 11:42 PM

SEA~
Thank you sweetie~

BluesSerenade~
Nicely said .. thank you~

Duncan~
Awwww ... thanks~

GentleSpirit~
I smile all over ... thanks gal~

VanDana~ Yes~

BettyLou~
My cup is full ... and I'm enjoying each sip~
Thanks lovely spirit~

GreenEyes~
Thank you hon~

Wanda~
Thank you so much ... Always goes to him first~

MarshaLove~
Ummmmm ... $ ??
LOL ... thanks gal ... love you~

SmartChick~
Thank you, my friend~

Karilea~
Yeaaaaaah ....
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

13 posted 2002-02-22 09:02 PM

Hi Margie girl this is Krissy (Mushy’s daughter). Mum said you were a talented writer and she’s cetainly not wrong about that. Actually truth to tell I have been reading your poems for a couple of weeks now, and I agree with her, which obviously goes to prove we both have great taste.

You have written this beautifully and the shape is so wonderful. The love just shines in this one. The words are beautiful I really do like this

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

14 posted 2002-02-22 09:52 PM

Hiya sweetieMarge, gosh how I've missed reading your poetry online...
Anyways, I'm here2say this one brought a tear of joy2me2day and I thank u4sharing your love in your heart with all of us PoetFriends who you embrace each day...
HugzNmuah on cheekz2u dearPoetFriendMarge
*~coco~*

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

15 posted 2002-02-22 10:04 PM

Marge,
the shape matched the sentiment. It was so "awe - able"
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

16 posted 2002-02-23 11:44 AM

Gosh Sis,

I been gone so long and now look what I've missed. Bill's got it made in the shade. I stole that line from somebody out of the 60's free speech movement, they didn't care.

just dale

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

17 posted 2002-02-24 01:02 AM

Marge-
Awwwwwwwww...just hugs...big happy hugs..
Love you,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

18 posted 2002-02-24 01:19 AM

Romantic and filled with such love.Nicely done.
Peaches

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

19 posted 2002-02-24 05:57 PM

Marge--Bill is lucky to have such a sweet heart!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

20 posted 2002-03-17 09:32 PM

*Thanks everyone ... this one slipped right by me in the 'responding to thank you' zone~

I appreciate each and every sweet reply~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

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