Maybe Writing Is Good (A Pantoum, I Hope) For Nan

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Open Poetry #19

Maybe Writing Is Good (A Pantoum, I Hope) For Nan

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-03-17 06:20 PM

They say writing is good for you
Even when you're feeling down
I often wonder if this is true
Moodiness I have often found

Even when you're feeling down
With no one here to even talk to
Living here so far from town
I don't know what I should do

With no one here to even talk to
I think maybe, I have lost my mind
My head is cluttered with things too
A way to write them, I can't find

I think maybe, I have lost my mind
Not even one day is ever new
Lonely days always fill my time
When there is nothing else to do

Not even one day is ever new
Depression I think has set in
I have fought it for so long too
No matter what I do, I can't win

Depression I think has set in
Now I don't know what to do
With depression I can not win
Maybe writing is good for you
© By Sue 3-10-02

PearlsB4Swine
Member

since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

1 posted 2002-03-17 07:38 PM

This was very well structured, and the message intended was cohesive and right on track! Excellent work!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-03-17 08:15 PM

SweetSmartChick~
EXCELLENT poetess ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-03-17 09:14 PM

Not too shabby....Not an easy thing to do..
I think you did just fine!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-17 09:28 PM

(big huggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and your sorrow but I believe deep down with all my heart that as long as you always write out your thoughts with us all, you will feel much better as we all support you and listen to you and will find great hope and happiness soon! (kiss on cheek) This is an excellent pantou, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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