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Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-02-19 01:01 AM

Your Loss

Dont shut me down
Block me out
You know just what to say
To lock me up
Close my mouth
Not to hear what I have to say

Your loss
I won't again
Share that part of me
Pretty soon
No more left
All locked away
To deep for you to see

Connie Mcdonald
Copyright@2000
July 12, 2000

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-02-19 07:08 AM

It's amazing how deeply we can bottle things up inside and bury them from view ... you've captured this well Connie, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-02-19 11:02 AM

Zinsser - this writing I know only too well. You tell it well also...

BC

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

3 posted 2002-03-09 01:05 PM

well expressed, we all have all felt those frustrations at times in relation to those around us.

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

4 posted 2002-03-09 01:17 PM

Connie - I know this feeling all too well. Sometimes, though, you bottle things up too deep, and later regret never expressing them. I think I have a case of bottles at this point, buried deep within me. Nice writing.

Dave

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-09 02:08 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Connie, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to everyone who yearns to express something but never has the courage too, especially from the vows of lovers! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so uch, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2002-03-09 02:21 PM

Connie
Great write.
And been there and still am..

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-03-09 02:41 PM

Very well said feelings....and I would feel
comfortable that the other person deserves
to be treated just so....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-03-09 02:47 PM

I noticed the date, July 2000. Are you still bottled up? Stick that bottle in the ocean waves and let it go.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-03-09 02:50 PM

I ditto Kacy above! I do hope you are feeling better about things now. You expressed this sooo well.
Hugs. Nancy.

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

10 posted 2002-03-09 04:16 PM

Thanks everyone, this one kinda just popped up outa no where : ) and yes it was a long time ago : ) I have many poems that 1. I would never post LOL as I'm sure many can relate to 2. others that just at the time I wouldn't post... for whatever reson...
Thanks again for all you posts
Connie

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