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Rough Seas Of Wind Burned Uniqueness
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Rough Seas Of Wind Burned Uniqueness |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Storming churning upset yearning Rough seas of thoughts in turmoil Never ending positioned words bobbing In arrangements in striking darkness Whirling twirling emotion learning Stillness in clammy dungeon moldy spongy wetness Molded shells of soft decay grow stagnant Green slimed mind endings sliding on instinct Sewage of nostrils heaving for sanities isolation Soothing dry mouth evaporating wind burned words Brittle sayings of shattered glass being splintered Stained panes of recycled memories blurring in pastels Bleeding hands of rusted waste deteriorating A crock pot of ingredients each one unique Any item misaligned it is trashed and lost Blending perfectly in the taste that will overcome doubt Shattered glass in bleeding hands being reworked In slimy pastel clay shells the positioning is blended The minds instinctively molds in isolated sanity A piece invented being so unique That every angle reflects back upon another No color predominates in endless variety Words come so diverse As to each one going on their own journey Shattered dreams of emotions lay vindicated In all the senses that hurt from existing Email me if you want a critique on or off line at davelyoung1@hotmail.com I write so much that I may seem to be inconsiderate of others; I do apologize for my flaws. D.Lester Young (02/14/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) http://www.writtenbyme.com/userprofile.php?name=davelyoung1 http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=5012 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very thought provoking write here Dave! Well expressed thoughts to ponder...I like that in a piece such as this. Good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
a literate stew of emotion, fraught with touches of longing. Net some of those old whims, Dave, put them into words, and the world will be your oyster. excuse me, while i clam up now, and reread this interesting write. tSR |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Would certainly enjoy knowing the background for this piece...almost each line could stand alone... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a powerful piece, sweet friend, your wonderful words of wisdom always leave me in awe! (big hugggssssss) I too thinki this can be divided into any seperate poems and thoughts, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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