Open Poetry #19 |
Kiss Of A Goddess |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Kiss Of A Goddess By: Noah Eaton 2/18/02 Come hither, my fair lady I promise I will always be faithful You have my word, my sweet darling In the wake of love we will be bountiful In the breast of the rising sun We will wear our dreams as a brooch We will run in the meadow saffron of our Land of Canaan Skipping to the sun, together as lovers we will boast There are so many words to describe your sweetness And it is never easy to specify Even so, from my calliope I will forever recite loves lyrics All for you, my sweet love, until the end of time Forever may you wear my love as a corsage To remind you that you'll always be my goddess I vow to make you happy forever and a day I will always be your faithful Adonis [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-27-2002 09:05 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a lucky woman she is, too. That last stanza should be saved for wedding vows. Sandra |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So romantic, Noah..I believe you must be a poet, and she, lucky! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwwwwww, you are such a sweetheart, I love you sweetie! kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss your guinevere, Joanna |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
Mistletoe angel My first post to you did not go through. thankyou for your kind words.This was so awsome it took my breath away. Where was my husband when god was passing out romantics? hehe, Lia |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hi Noah, Great spice ThisDiamond |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice Noah...James |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Noah, This is simply exquisite! What a lucky woman she is!Keep writing! Neha |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah it's wonderful to be in love...enjoy it *s M |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
You have the blessed gift of giving words to the feelings of your heart.This is a devine gift be greatful you possess it. paladin |
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