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Making Love To You
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Making Love To You |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Making Love To You By: Noah Eaton 2/27/02 I am a hopeless romantic I think of you everyday I swear I’ve found the other end of the rainbow It already feels like May Day Ever since you stepped into my life I keep feeling your afterglow This puppy love you have given me Has brought such a happy smile to my soul I used to feel like Don Quixote I felt my charity didn’t mean anything I retired myself as a squire Just to become some freelance merchant of dreams Then I saw your velveteen smile It blankets me every night in my sleep It’s like seeing a congested highway of ice cream trucks When your sweet love is all I need… Sweet sunflower How you delight my day Singing to my heart like a music box Karaoke of God plays You are why the ebb of the ocean flows You are why the Polynesian moon gleams You are the girl of my dreams I want to hold you so badly Would you dance with me as I asked you too? In this moonlight waltz I will make sweet love to you I will make sweet love to you I will make sweet love to you Sweet puppy love… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-27-2002 12:56 PM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Noah hi there, I love the flow of this it’s absolutely perfect. YOU and Joanna make such a pretty pair, I hope this love grows and grows you are certainly writing such beautiful words of delight to her. This is lovely Beautifully portrayed by a beautiful poet   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
And of course she said yes and you lived happily ever after.... I pray for you that all your dreams come true.... : ) |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I hope this comes true Great write  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
it is always sooooooo good to see how you shine with love.....may love always brighten your path. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Then I saw your velveteen smile It blankets me every night in my sleep It’s like seeing a congested highway of ice cream trucks When your sweet love is all I need… Noah, Wherever do you get your ideas?!! I just love this. Sweet romantic one. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dearest Noah, Me thinks this is not puppy love. But the real thing. You write so well about it that I know you must feel it strongly. great poem. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, this is one of my favorites. Many great analogies here. I like this part especially. I used to feel like Don Quixote I felt my charity didn’t mean anything I retired myself as a squire Just to become some freelance merchant of dreams Sandra |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Young love is like walking in an enchanted garden.Every where you look something new and fantastic is revealed. paladin |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You are why the ebb of the ocean flows You are why the Polynesian moon gleams You are the girl of my dreams This is so gorgeous Noah..she is so lucky. Purely loving and sensual. Love and hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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