Open Poetry #19 |
Lend Me A Shoulder |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lend Me A Shoulder ~*Grandma Marge*~ Lend me a shoulder, Grandma where softly I can hear the whispers of your heartfelt sighs Where I can dream my dreams setting my wings to fly~ Lend me a poetic moment to send me off in slumber To The Cave of the Good Dreams where happy thoughts wander~ Oh, my sweet Delaney may you always stay on the shoulder of this Grandma for all our days~ *I thank the Lord for the joy of this child* February 27, 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
such happiness in your life, Marge I can't help but smile with you. *s ~A~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...this is so very beautiful...it brought tears of joy to my heart to read it and to see it...Absolutely perfect. I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah...nicely done..and a very cute picture to go with it! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Grandma Marge, this is so sweet. I am so glad I figured out how to find this while I am at work. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge-- You are making this grandma smile and miss my own grandaughter...they grow so fast and time just keeps on going. Hugs to you both! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am gonna cry!! This is so sweet and that beautiful Grandbaby of yours makes me wish for all the baby smells and the quiet rocking.....so touching |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A for both of you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl Oh my stars this is so utterly adorable, and yes she looks perfect on you darling Margie This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it showers of moonbeams descend on you. They dropped like little twinkles of delight when I read this. Oh my eyes they are refreshed and my soul is washed in joy this is sooooooooo beautiful Delaney is truly beautiful Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When I read the title, my first response was "Lady, it's yours... anytime you need it." *S* But now that I know it's for baby-holding and not for tears, I'm being a good aunt and volunteering BOTH of mine. LOL This is beautiful, Marge... The werk monster would skin me alive if I slipped away to The Cave of the Good Dreams *G*... but you've given my thoughts a happy path to wander. *S* May Delaney forever bask in the love and security she finds waiting in your arms. *S* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
AWWWWWWWW, thanks for the memories I have of my 2 girls sleeping on my shoulder....so sweet Marge~ Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Grin, Grandma, and enjoy the effect of the smiles...babies will do that to you...make you mush and all.... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An adorable poem for an adorable grandaughter, Marge! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ain't life grand? Especially life as a granmother! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I loved this earlier and I love it now. Being a grandma is a gift from God. floria Floria |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There's just nothing else like it, is there, Marge?!!! Precious!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliceThruGlass~ Thank you so much for your *smile*~ StarTime~ Thanks gal .. those misty-eyed moments come quickly~ CPatHair~ Thank you very much~ SmartChick~ HUGS .. thank you my friend~ Martie~ Yeah ... time flies ... a part of me wants her to remain tiny ... but ... it's hard to reach the keyboard from that size ! She now weighs in at a whopping 7 lbs. 2 oz.~ SEA~ Isn't that the truth ? Ahhh ... the fragrance of a baby ... nothing like it~ Seymour~ Thank you, love. She's got the perfect rosey cheeks to plant that kiss on~ MarshaLove~ And I know you mean every word of it~ Thank you sweet soul-sister~ SuthernGal~ What a lovely, lovely reply~ From the heart of a true friend ... I love you too~ GreenEyes~ Isn't it the bestest memory there is~ Thanks dearie~ SoleilNoir~ Can't stop grinning~ And I 'fess up ... I'm total MUSH~ Lyra~ Thank you sweet lady~ InterLoper~ Yes it is indeed ! Thanks sweetie~ Floria~ Yes ... God places them in our hearts to show us how much more love we have left to give~ Thank you hon~ Denise~ Yes ... you're right ... and she is a blessing~ Love you lady~ *Hugs* to you ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwww...Marge, I almost started to cry. What a sight for the heart the two of you are. You hold her tight and give her tons and tons of lovins. What a little hug a bug. Love ya, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge....beautiful little child and a very proud grandmother....I can see it in the eyes...oh yes, indeed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartiMyFriend~ Oh go ahead and shed a few ... it wouldn't be the first baptismal tears she's received~ She is just the 'perfect fit' for this Grandma's shoulder~ Magnus~ It does show .. doesn't it ? That's pure love-light shining~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Awww Marge , this was so adorable , sweet and hugable Absolutely gorgous Hope |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Marge... Grandmothering certainly becomes you! Your poems about Delaney are beautiful, and so is Delaney! Your words are so full of love and tenderness. I can't wait to see more. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I am grinning at the puter screen.....babies are so special....and I am sure grandbabies are wonderful....still waiting on one to spoil....two married daughters and no grandbabies yet come on girls...of course one just got married Sat. as much love as you show in your poems I am sure they feel it a 1000 times over.... Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- You are just the bestest grandma.. I love this...it's priceless...as are you. Now...pass little Delaney this way...her Auntie Vicky has comfy shoulders too, ya know..LOL. Besides...it's kind of hard to write when you're holding her, isn't it? LOL Love you both, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-28-2002 03:55 AM).] |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh...my.....such a lovely piece.... Adorable..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ Thank you~ She is a delight to hold and hug~ Bec~ Thanks bookoodles~ SEE folks ... SHE HAS ASKED FOR M O R E ! I love ya', Bec~ Dan~ Just knowing we made you smile gives a caress to my heart~ Hang in there ... I waited a long time for this one~ AuntieVicky~ Heard Delaney calling you, did ya' ? Okay ... you can snuggle her while I write her another poem ! I love you gal~ MyEnchantedMelody~ Thank you so very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so sweet Marge. This is lovely. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwwwwww Grandma Marge, she is soooooo adorable, and lucky to have such a wonderful shoulder to lend on.....Grandma's shoulders are the best (((hugs))) Charisma |
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