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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-04-06 10:31 PM



A feather soft articulates my emotions
Still warm of potent summer potions
Stretched out upon the greenest grass
To float so lightly in the looking glass

A fluffy wisp of down adrift to wave
Still magical of silken touch to crave
Slip satin in a brush across your brow
To float lightly up into the wind somehow

A feather plumes of tufted heartfelt whispers
Still delicate of form to flurry daytime drifters
Sent out across the space between to note
A feather soft remember on the breeze to float

Copyright Kkh 4/6/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-04-06 10:34 PM


ThisDiamond - a most soft write and the feather remembered. Nice, very nice...

BC

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2 posted 2002-04-06 11:18 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I felt a soft breeze whistling through my ears reading this, sweet friend, this poem flys as light as a feather with grace! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-04-06 11:22 PM


Lovely...very lovely...floated down the page just as gentle as a feather....
nicely done...
Hugs.

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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MA, USA
4 posted 2002-04-07 12:39 PM


ThisDiamond...Feather light, feather wafting poem that touches the heart with its beauty.

***Ivy Rose

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
5 posted 2002-04-07 12:39 PM


A feather plumes of tufted heartfelt whispers
Still delicate of form to flurry daytime drifters

Very beautiful, Kathleen
~feathery hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-04-07 08:33 AM


loved the feel of this one..
*s
M

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