Open Poetry #19 |
Dinner By Candlelight |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“DINNER BY CANDLELIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Standing there to greet, evening gown supreme… Blue its color, delicate, only seen in a dream… Roses my bouquet, my hand you take… Wine red, as your lips, feelings to awake… Music dreamy to hear, like tender whispers… Wanting only you, precious, to be lovers… Shadows on the wall, dancing into night… Gazing eyes soft, dinner by candlelight… ~~~~ |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
This is so romantic ... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are Back, Mr.C..nice to have you here too hugss Me |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
YES Bill is baaaaaaack......Great romantic poem, I could almost taste the wine. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always gleam with such pure and innocent love, she will be so lucky to have dinner with you forever! (big hugggssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sounds good to me Bill..lovely words as always.. ~Victoria
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I find that you and I speak the same language, that is a good thing. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What lovely sentiment...and a great date. Have much fun in your life. ThisDiamond |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? You realise that you are making me mad with jealousy and envy. Well, you would if I was capable of writing anything even half as lovely as this beautiful gem is. Oh how I’ve missed you darling boy, the days have just seemed somehow unfinished, or more correctly simply not whole Thank you for the injection of beauty and delight you’ve given me. This is utterly utterly wonderful. Welcome home darling boy Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sounds like a romantic evening, Bill... for you and a very lucky lady. ~hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...My idea of a perfect date!!! Really...this poem wonderfully romantic, powerfully written. ***Ivy Rose |
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