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Watching The Eyes
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Watching The Eyes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I am your knight, I guard you from harm. keep you safe and well, resting in an arm I am the one, that will know from the start when words so soft are chisels of the heart Look from the tower, see my armor shine Whisper once this hour, purest love so fine. Watch carefully, searching the eyes well. Sleep peacefully as words can not alone tell. Lie beside me, let me keep you ever close I’ll comfort and guide thee on path chose Keep the moments of rhyme in your mind for they are once wild, cherished and fine. Give not thy heart to whispers said sweet till eyes do spill the soul’s true heartbeat. And when the night again becomes a dawn I stand beneath..guarding a small fawn. [This message has been edited by Magnus (04-04-2002 11:19 PM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ You write romance like no other, this is stunning... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahh...the Watcher of the innocent...how you made me smile this early morning...thank you! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy WHAT can I say this is utterly utterly exquisite writing. Why has it not got more replies. Hello peeps are you all a little sleepy today? Wake up you there’s beauty lying here begging to be read. Absolutely excellent writing you know I love every golden word. YOU are an incredible writer. Fabulous    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful Barry..I think I may borrow this phrase if I might..I seem to be inspired today. "chisels of the heart" hugss M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"And when the night again becomes a dawn I stand beneath..guarding a small fawn."   (smiles) Such graciousness and compassion illuminates your verse, sweet friend, He will always be here for us all, as we too can offer our love to the world and sip from the stream of purity and love like the fawn in your vision! (big hugggsssss) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Barry Now I see the "Galant" side of you. Nicely done and sooooooooo romantic. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm nice..my very own knight! I like this protective side of you Barry. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Barry, this is beautiful Give not thy heart to whispers said sweet till eyes do spill the soul’s true heartbeat When you are knighted for your poetry, I will remember that I knew you ...when...  ~hugs in shining armour~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - nicely done, liked this one much... BC |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...You and Bill Charles are two of the most romantic writers I know. Your work always has that days of knights and fair maidens feel to it. This poem no exception. ***Ivy Rose |
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