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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-04-05 12:38 PM

Shiver

she waited
in darkness
across her hair
a kiss
of wind
remembering
it was
once where
his hand
had been
now alone
in the shadows

a shiver

would it
ever be
there again

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-04-05 12:47 PM

Wonderful!
GR8!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-04-05 12:52 PM

1slick_lady - I wonder also...

BC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-04-05 01:12 PM

I love the question..still waiting the answer to follow...

made me think of this:

phantom kisses
rise the warmth on cheeks
where flutterings
were the paths
once left by shadows
in the dark

*s
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-05-2002 01:13 PM).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-04-05 03:20 PM

do we want some shivers never to be warm??

well done helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-04-05 03:29 PM

1slick_lady
That is 1 slick write.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-04-05 03:48 PM

I wonder that too

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2002-04-05 05:26 PM

I know this wonder. *S* And I love the poem you've written, describing it so well. *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-04-05 07:45 PM

Now Helen you just KNOW I love this style of writing...absolutely love it! Beautiful.
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-04-05 08:59 PM

1slick_lady - yes, I must believe that it will be there once again, perhaps not the same one, but one...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-04-05 09:47 PM

(sigh) This is wonderfully bittersweet, dearest friend, I am sure with all my heart love will again caress her heart and loves hands will forever heal her aching heart! (kiss on cheek) This is sensitive and heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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