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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-04-05 03:41 PM

A repost with a bit of editing...

Each crevice, cove
mountain or strong tower
any place from the sun
inwhich to hide, cower
he exposes grandiose
Wah-lah! The Witch!
stealer of men's souls
cold,unfeeling [edited]!

Even nights without moon
find his eyes searching
like vulture upon crest
loitering, lurking
watching each move
in a hurry to make haste
to stab her into
& lay her to waste

absence preferable
to his infamous ire
she hides again
but he never tires
rather, he muses
his self righteous notions
secure in his beliefs
BITTERNESS,
strong potion...

~Tier
8/01
{4/02}

Additional Editing by Sunshine/Moderator
[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-05-2002 04:47 PM).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-04-05 04:30 PM

Damn Tier...that was almost scary. Strong indeed!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-04-05 08:09 PM

Beautifully written, Tier........but it gives me goosebumps! YOW!!!!!!!!

~bewitchingly evil hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2002-04-05 08:17 PM

oh yes, me got tingles up my spine!
very good writing

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-04-05 09:32 PM

Tiers, chilling this was, I cant write like that so I do admire it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-05 09:35 PM

(big hugggsssss) Oh my gosh, this too gave me the heebie-jeebies, sweet friend, this is wonderfully haunted and deep with emotion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

6 posted 2002-04-05 09:40 PM

Tiersdin...just beginning to catchup (not Ketchup, i prefer mustard) on
your prose work as well. Well diverse subject matter, with fantastic
plots and twists. ~salute~ to your sense of
style
tSR

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