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Sorrowful Tears (villanelle)
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859
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Sorrowful Tears (villanelle) Sorrowful tears of heaven fall on me. Sadness fills my heart and soul this day. He is no longer here and ne'er shall be. How did this misery fall down on me? Now with a heavy heart I kneel to pray. Sorrowful tears of heaven fall on me. A time there was when my heart felt so free. Another year another day that was. He is no longer here and ne'er shall be. My mind goes back in time, in memory. Of happy days when we would laugh and play. Sorrowful tears of heaven fall on me. But other plans God made for his destiny. He called my son back home to Him that day. He is no longer here and ne'er shall be. One day again we'll meet eternally. But until then my grief and sorrow stay. Sorrowful tears of heaven fall on me. He is no longer here and ne'er shall be. Floria Kelderhouse © 2002 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Floria darling girl this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. Wonderful flow and rhythm as you seem to always do. The sadness throbs through this absolutely fabulous and outstanding piece of writing. YOU are an excellent writer and I’m awed by your ability to portray such emotion. This is utterly utterly fabulous writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
floria, dear friend. I share your sweet sorrow of separation. And I know that your son awaits you with more love than you could ever imagine. It will be worth it all when you see him, again.  ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You do these so well! I love it! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Marsha for all your kind words. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you so much Newell. I will never stop missing him. He was one in a million, truly a wonderful son. floria Interloper, I do it well because my soul misses him so much, thank you, floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Floria, my heart goes out to you, I understand how you feel with all my heart and I know so very much that you will reunite with him someday, but I know until then he will always guide you with his love and your love and his together shall go on forever! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel, we all love you so much, I am here always if you need someone to talk to! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very touching and beautifully penned hon..hugss.. Enjoyed your tender words ~Victoria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thanks dear Noah for all your kindness. floria thanks Victoria and ((hugs)) back to you. floria thank you Vandana. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for sharing this lovely heartbreaking poem with us, Floria.... May peace be with you tonight. ~lots of hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Floria~ I felt the ache and sorrow in your words...Makes me wonder at times what God's plan is all about. Bless your heart dear poetess. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you dear Lyra, I hope you are doing well. love, floria Blues thank you for your kind words, yes I ask Him all the time what His plans are, but one day we will know..thank you blues. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Floria, I cannot imagine the pain it is to lose a child. It is hard enough when it is an older relative. Bless you for even having the strength to carry on. Hugs Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Sandra, we don't really get a choice, We carry on because we have to for other family members and God wants us to. I guess facing the reality of it is the hardest thing, but there is nothing one can do but accept it. It does hurt, thanks dear. floria Floria |
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