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No Wishes............. Inspired by Professor Gloom
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No Wishes............. Inspired by Professor Gloom |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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no coins in the fountain no wishes in the well all the hopes risen at once gently fell no sunshine glimmer upon countless faith toss no answers to prayers a complete loss dried up and faded no copper residue I have no money to throw no more wishes of you ~SEA~ /pip/Forum58/HTML/001501.html *thank you Professor  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'd say you were inspired.. nice piece SEA |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'd give you a penny to toss, to wish upon but then again why throw good money after bad |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Duncan's answer is as good as your poem, SEA...you're on quite a roll...lend me your muse, hey? |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
There is always hope, Susan. I firmly believe that, because I believe it's all in attitude and the way we go about reaching our objective. Now write something positive!  LOL (((hugs)))Michael Jealousy is both warden and thief to a woman's freedom. Imprison the warden and thief! Allow her the same freedoms you've always taken for granted, so |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I sit on concrete, The edge of the empty pool, I can’t be discrete Just a sentimental fool, Try to fill it with my tears. Gloom Nicely inspired, and inspirational in return |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know what the little cricket said right? A dream is a wish your heart makes ah, Susan you were indeed inspired.~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautifully inspiring yet so sad, I believe we all have these feelings, but I know as long as we hold a dream close and perservere with a loving smile and hope, we will find true joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, now think of happy thoughts and hold them dear, this is a wonderful inspiration by Aszard, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Nicely written, as always. May I answer? Gee, I feel very, very bad When sweet, kind wishes turn so sad Why can't we see there's something more Somewhere where wishes fill, galore. I'm wishing for peace, joy and happiness, for everyone, forever, in God. ((Susan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I wonder if wishes can come true...but I guess if one has no faith in them they won't...BRAVO!!!Well done.**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you alone may grant all the wishes of my life if only you would Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very well done...... : ) |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Susan - Really liked this one. The metaphor you used, the flow, all very good. I would give you a penny, but all I have are hundreds.lol Dave |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl Ahhh darling girl first find the wish and then dreams the dream, and then it will be granted. This is beautiful it really is, wishes do come true and this is excellent writing Such beauty is amazing to see you’ve brought tears of delight to my eyes. Wonderful Utterly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue...a wonderful inspire! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Realistic and tender. I love it. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much, but the praise goes to the Professor for the inspire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems like a good day to bring this back up...just to get some sunshine.... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Susan I loved this, and the funny thing about life is, Just as we see things as an end, God sees it as a beginning. You never know what your future holds, You may just be surprised. Positive thinking and faith is all that is needed. This was great and I truly can see the Prof influence on it. floria Floria |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, Need a loan? My penny jar is full.  Excellent but tragic write.  |
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