Open Poetry #19 |
Next To Silence |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Next To Silence I sit next to silence stays here by my side that is not the worst part which would be the roar inside I don’t want another morning to wake up here alone is the not knowing better than the unknown I can’t stand this silence it echoes a heart’s loudest degree there is a deeper story it is all a part of me "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Helen, this is sooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now joy and hope has touched your heart and now that too is all a a part of you, for you are a very loving friend to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick I can see your eyes watching the tides hearing the whispers behind and under enjoyed your work here |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As long as you reside here at Passion's you will never be alone Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
isn't it a truism that silence echoes the loudest in the empty chambers of the heart? We all want someone to know the deepest part of us, yet seldom is that person anywhere to be found. quite an endearing self-write, Slickest Lady! Enjoyed the layout as well. tSR |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I can’t stand this silence it echoes a heart’s loudest degree 1Slick (helen), this is a splendid writePoetFriend... ThanxSweetie4sharing this... *~coco~* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Silence...or words left unsaid. Both can be deafening. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
silence is good, but it can also make me think too much. Nice read. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - silence can be very devestating, especially when one waits for a single word... BC |
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