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Daemon
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Daemon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Daemon A daemon seems to stay my way And eats the shadows of my stay I feel the battle’s gone full tilt And I am in a stage of wilt. I’m caught a web that circles round That fills the air and lives the ground. A field of lilies fills the glen And daffodils won’t bloom again. Weary lies across my back Outs the candle leaving black Numbing all the senses bare And stifling the very air My lance is down I feel a clown The moon is up the sun is down. I gallop at the circles edge And have no favor or a pledge. Allurements wings are sore with play I cannot find the light of day. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Stinky-love...if I give you hugs and butterfly kisses will you smile and find your dragon's wile for me.      |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'll pay a visit to my Isle The one that stores my Randy wile For those flowers of my mind Are surely of another kind. Winkiewinkie Stinky.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
sometimes weary leaves me teary then I'm leary of one's fiery in retrospect I'm circumspect but your read is my expect... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Lovely sunshine this morning. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
been tilting at windmills? ;-> I enjoyed! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, even when your muse is weary you still manage to lift the day. How do you chase the grey from the sky? Well, however you do it you succeed darling boy. One day I shall read one of your poems and say Oh that’s not as good as his usually are? ………. And that day will be when the earth stops turning time rolls backwards, the sun falls from the heavens and the rain falls up. Absolutely wonderful exquisite writing, I love it. Has the smile returned to warm your eyes and settle briefly on your lips? I hope so   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If daffodils won't bloom again I'll still have Seymour's trusty pen To brighten a cloud-laden sky And make me glad that I stopped by. Questions pondered, demons faced... So many varied subjects graced With his attention... we all gain... May his great talent never wane. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Weary lies across my back Outs the candle leaving black Numbing all the senses bare And stifling the very air don't we all feel that way at times..you have the greatest rhythm..and rhyming skills enjoyed it *s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Capy Hair, Yes thank you. Marsha, For you it is ever there. Suthern, Thank you sweet Maureen. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour your rhythm skills blow me away. Bloooooooooooooooow,, I'm gone. LOL floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, Thank you for the comp. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
 Quite devilish, Sy..... ~red devilish hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, But isn't if fun being devilish. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Wow, oh my gosh, this is indeed very beautifully haunting and delightfully devilish, sweet friend, your wonderfrul words never cease to amaze me! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Once more, with wings takes the devil out of sting. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Powerful and well written poetry you have here...and I loved the rhythm. Well done, I enjoyed reading!  *Krista Knutson* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. Martie, Many don't know the devil has wings Alwye, A beautiful comment and I thank you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A daemon seems to stay my way And eats the shadows of my stay I feel the battle’s gone full tilt And I am in a stage of wilt. We reap what we sow and if all the tender loving care doesn't keep us from wilting, then I guess it's time to plant new seeds. But I do know the disappointment after putting in so much time. I really like that pen you write with Mr. Tabin.! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade, And I like the pen you write. Thank you |
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