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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Thunderstorm In times of gloom and sorrow When you drift upon a heavy stream While darkness tortures woeful souls Developing like one dark dream A thunderstorm across your whole Seems there is no one around To enfold you in soothing rest And to heal your bleeding wounds In times of haunting grief When thorns punish your sense's core Bleeding tears flow from innermost Then know that I will ease your sores Wrap you in my healing wings Tightly against my chest Know that I fly with you Understand that you've been blest Don't be afraid in these colorless hours 'Cause I'm watching over you Guard your path with sacred wings Sheltering you in days of blue 03/04/02 Charisma ~*TMP*~ ~*Theresia~* [This message has been edited by Charisma (04-04-2002 07:16 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma! You don't show up for days then come back with splendor! This wraps around me very well, my dear....thank you! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully upbeat and compassionate piece, sweet friend, your words alays glow with such love and warmth that can outshine any storm! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much, your message strikes likea lightning bolt! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, You are full of the seeds of wonderful words. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma, this is so beautiful, and that picture, I love it! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A wonderful write. Thank you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Karilea: I am glad to be back home, missed writing a lot, and I am glad that you like this one. Noah: My beautiful warmhearted angel, your replies and faith in me inspired my muse to write again. Thank you Angel Seymour: thank you dear friend Sea: Thank you and yes I too love the art, it is from David Penfound. Interloper: Thank you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Charisma - a most touching poem written by you that I could read. I could use those healing wings right now... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Charisma..beautifully done..always enjoy reading your words hugss ~Victoria
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ya know ..... sometimes you come in here to enjoy some good poetry and then you are blessed with one that will stay with you forever. Excellent write and such a pleasure to read you again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soothing...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Bill:  wrap my healing wings around you, one step a time to recover soul. Victoria: thank you for the lovely, so glad you enjoyed my words Mark: What a lovely suprise to see you here, and I am extremely happy to know that you liked my words. I for one miss your awesome poetry a lot. JamesMichael: thank you [This message has been edited by Charisma (04-05-2002 06:27 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is beautiful, and hopeful. I have felt a constant thunderstorm of late. Peace Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
In times of haunting grief When thorns punish your sense's core Bleeding tears flow from innermost Then know that I will ease your sores Wrap you in my healing wings Tightly against my chest Know that I fly with you Understand that you've been blest Charisma...this is such a lovely poem... and so very comforting.... thanks for posting it.  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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