Open Poetry #19 |
Petal Of The Red Rose (TD's Challenge) |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Silken lines of delicate curve Creamy flesh in scent superb Of blossom blooms the nectar cup Upon the breeze, the bees show up Dainty colored romance themes Passions stain in pastel dreams Of softest face and perfume scent Upon the blush amore is meant Sweet with dew in morning sun Bright subdue or vibrant one A part of summer as it grows Upon the thorn the sweet red rose Copyright Kkh 4/5/02 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ah! The sweet red rose. Very nicely penned, ThisDiamond. I love your writing! Would you like a dozen? ((ThisDozen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-04-2002 09:04 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words glimmer with the spring and summer beauty, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is enchanting, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
mmmmmm with innate rainflow your words radiate elucidate illuminate the reader's imagination just like they are supposed to do. Such a pleasure to read you, TD. tSR |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This diamond, your rhythm and flow are terrific. I love this so much. floria Floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I have room for this beautiful poem right in my library! You know I love this, I am a fan of roses, as you can see by my user name Very, very pretty |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Now that was the most romantic piece I have seen in a long while, very nicely done TD! Quotation, n: The act of repeating erroneously the words of another. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely words Kathleen..beautifully done ~Victoria
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Happy to share with all of you. Thank you for the encouragements and smiles. ThisDiamond |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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