A Love Note ( Marsha's challenge)

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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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0 posted 2002-04-04 11:52 AM

Let us trade annual buds
of yesterday
as you inhale
the scent of gardenia
and feel sheer black note
and taste satin words
across your lips
beneath velvet skies
nourished by moonlight
in your eyes
blooming forever
like the stars
embraced in the night
like silhouettes
upon our wall tonight

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (04-04-2002 04:42 PM).]

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-04-04 11:55 AM

I can smell the gardenia now

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

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FL, USA

2 posted 2002-04-04 11:57 AM

Nicely done. Challenge well met. Vic.

((Vic))
-newell

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-04-04 01:21 PM

Thank you interloper..i love the scent of gardenia ..

thank you for peeking today

Newell...thank you..i enjoyed writing the challenge..a very good one it was..

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-04-04 03:29 PM

what kind of flowers grow best in the moonlight???

well. . . you know. . . great work here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Victoria

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5 posted 2002-04-04 04:01 PM

Thank you sven..yes i remember i wrote about it before..a moonflower

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-04 04:11 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always blossom like a flower and are filled with the lilac scent of inspiration and beauty! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful challenge reply, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-04-04 04:38 PM

Victoria,
Now that's a note to remember!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2002-04-04 05:54 PM

thank you so much kethry..nice to hear from you..

~Victoria

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-04-04 07:53 PM

Wow Victoria, where do you get your words. This is lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-04-04 08:31 PM

Victoria - love those night silhouettes dancing on the wall...

BC

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

11 posted 2002-04-04 08:33 PM

Victoria...Wonderful love note!!!! I just love your words and this poem. ***Ivy Rose

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2002-04-04 08:51 PM

Such romance upon the paper dance. ThisDiamond

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-04-04 09:25 PM

I love Gardenias, and Plumeria. They make me think of warm tropical breezes and happy nights.
Beautiful write, Vic.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

14 posted 2002-04-04 09:48 PM

the smell of gardenia, the poetess's soft words....a beautiful write Vic. Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

15 posted 2002-04-04 10:34 PM

a perennial favorite of mine,
you are, Vic
in friendship, in words
you make everyone's day
a joy to be a part of

glowwords at their best, Vic. Yepp yepp yeppp!
~huuuuuugggs and stuff~
jeff

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

16 posted 2002-04-05 01:25 PM

Floria dear..thank you so much for your
kind words..hugsss

Bill thank you ..yes im sure you do ha..

thank you Ivy..i enjoyed the challenge

ThisDiamond..thank you for peeking in

sandra..thank you and i love both too..hugss

thank you Donna..nice to hear from you hugss

Jeff..thank you and I appreciate your sweet words..hugss and stuff back ha

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