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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-04-04 03:57 PM


“ROMANCE TO OFFER”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Lost in a world within,
just wanting to begin...
A being in the shadows,
walking alone, in meadows…

Feeling the foggy mist,
moist, as it kissed…
Surrounding me calming,
perhaps someone embracing…

My eyes seem to agonize,
emptiness seen to fantasize…
Yet knowing you are there,
to walk together, anywhere…

Searching for an omen,
desire only just one…
Not a taker, but a giver,
a heart of romance, to offer…
~~~~



© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-04 04:01 PM


Ahhh Bill, you ARE Mr. Romance!
This is beautiful...
You have so much to give.
Hugs and a huge sigh!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2002-04-04 04:09 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know with all my heart she will always be so lucky to have you for you have so much love to give and will find true happiness with her forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-04-04 04:42 PM


Bill,
Welcome back to the blue...romantic as ever I see
I liked this soft write,
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2002-04-04 04:59 PM


Sounds like the song of the matchmaker
Well done.

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5 posted 2002-04-04 09:01 PM


Bill darling boy WOW this is utterly utterly delightful you’ve written an absolute diamond here. The flow of thought in this is wonderful and the rhyme absolutely divine. YOUR words will spring romance in so many souls.

You know I adore this too don’t you, my goodness you’ve been missed darling boy

Truly excellent writing, which I enjoyed tremendously. Well done


Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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6 posted 2002-04-04 09:22 PM


So nice to read your romantic writes again, Bill.
This is a beauty.
Sandra

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (04-04-2002 09:23 PM).]

Larry C
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7 posted 2002-04-05 12:15 PM


Bill,
I was right, you haven't lost your touch. Cool. Welcome back.

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8 posted 2002-04-05 05:51 AM


You have a way with words, wonderful penned as always Bill

Charisma

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9 posted 2002-04-05 06:44 AM


Weell. you know how I feel and you always know where I am...

many hugsss
M

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