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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-04-02 11:40 PM



I run my teeth across
The length of the ice cream tub
I suck the melting goo
that pools in the foaming crevasse
formed from the pushing of my tongue
into the icy crystal burn
I sit impatiently
as the outer border recedes
and my push-pop-pint prevails
it’s a helluva lot better
than washing a spoon at midnight!

© Copyright 2002 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-04-03 03:52 PM


Walt~
LOL ... I've watched this little thing all day ...
Reckon ya' had to be there, huh ?

Title sent shivers down my spine ...
(sort of like fingernails on a blackboard)
but I ventured in anyhow~

You are 'Chocolate Chip De-Minted'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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cruz
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since 2000-07-18
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2 posted 2002-04-03 11:13 PM


it's fun to be lazy. cool thoughts! try nutter butters as a spoon next time.  delish

Nan
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3 posted 2002-04-04 06:16 AM


Chocolate Chip please...
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2002-04-05 12:41 PM


Spare me your silverware!  


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