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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Always thought you'd have it better twenty-seven years maybe by now a job that made you smile and a car with a silver shimmer? Today you look around and cannot believe that is where you've been and this is where you've landed. Frustration mounts as you come home to undue anger shouting matches draining every ounce of motivation. I see it now- and the life you own is dwindling. All I want is to hold your hand and be your "inspiration" twenty-seven years and you could be blissful... And still you cannot see your worth- as you sit there just waiting for it Numb. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Well done  Let thy moon arise. William Blake [This message has been edited by lunatic (04-04-2002 11:19 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I enjoyed the read Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jenn~ I felt an undercurrent uplifting a friend~ Lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Extremely well done, Jenn. ((Jenn)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Jenn! Enjoyed the read. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you everyone. This is more of a story-telling poem- perhaps not quite prose though. Anyway, it's kind of important to hear your feedback so, thank you. Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Jenn, you have said this so very well, I too know this longing for I feel numb yearning for something I love so much but I know this day will come for you and you will feel true happiness always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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