Open Poetry #19 |
I Hope You Can See |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
I Hope You Can See By: Noah Eaton 4/2/02 The blinds are down Laying on my bed, I stay down on my pillow Wondering if you've been thinking of me If you love me as I'm madly in love with you I want to live Inside your eyes and lose myself Be your lifetime masseuse I can't imagine a life without you... I hope you can see... How much you mean to me... All I need is your kiss and to hear You say how much you love me I hope you can see How you're the one I need What can I do to please you Am I missing something? I look forward to each new day But I can't accept it without you I would sacrifice everything else Just to be able to hold you It would feel so good to realize How in my eyes you too see the light That I feel when I think of you Just that thought makes me feel alive... I hope you can see... How much you mean to me... All I need is your kiss and to hear You say how much you love me I hope you can see How you're the one I need What can I do to please you Am I missing something? When you don't speak thing seem so vague I just want to hear you say That you love me with all your heart With sincerity and without doubt in trace I think of you everyday... I hope you can see... How much you mean to me... All I need is your kiss and to hear You say how much you love me I hope you can see How you're the one I need What can I do to please you Am I missing something? You are everything to me... You are everything to me... Can you see, my Joanna? [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-02-2002 09:41 PM).] |
||
© Copyright 2002 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved | |||
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
beautiful...hmmmm..my lifetime masseuse?? That sounds awesome, will you polish my toe nails too? please Love it dear! |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Noah! Joanna is one lucky woman! Wow! You would do most anything for her...this is wonderful! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
A beautiful love letter Noah, that you have shared with all of us. ((((hugs)))) floria Floria "Alas for those that never sing, But die with all their music in them" (Oliver Wendell Holmes) [This message has been edited by strbbux (04-03-2002 04:25 PM).] |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED IT A LOT |
||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet one, I hope it all comes to pass as you hope. Beautiful request for love and declaration of love. Sandra |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, M'toe.... she's a very lucky lady! *S* |
||
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lucky Joanna! However, I think you better be a masseur Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
||
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - so nice to read your writings once more, and I know that she does see. All she has to do is read the poetry you write for her... BC |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |