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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-04-02 09:39 PM


I Hope You Can See
By: Noah Eaton
4/2/02

The blinds are down
Laying on my bed, I stay down on my pillow
Wondering if you've been thinking of me
If you love me as I'm madly in love with you
I want to live
Inside your eyes and lose myself
Be your lifetime masseuse
I can't imagine a life without you...

I hope you can see...
How much you mean to me...
All I need is your kiss and to hear
You say how much you love me
I hope you can see
How you're the one I need
What can I do to please you
Am I missing something?

I look forward to each new day
But I can't accept it without you
I would sacrifice everything else
Just to be able to hold you
It would feel so good to realize
How in my eyes you too see the light
That I feel when I think of you
Just that thought makes me feel alive...

I hope you can see...
How much you mean to me...
All I need is your kiss and to hear
You say how much you love me
I hope you can see
How you're the one I need
What can I do to please you
Am I missing something?

When you don't speak thing seem so vague
I just want to hear you say
That you love me with all your heart
With sincerity and without doubt in trace
I think of you everyday...

I hope you can see...
How much you mean to me...
All I need is your kiss and to hear
You say how much you love me
I hope you can see
How you're the one I need
What can I do to please you
Am I missing something?

You are everything to me...
You are everything to me...
Can you see, my Joanna?


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-02-2002 09:41 PM).]

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-04-02 09:54 PM


beautiful...hmmmm..my lifetime masseuse?? That sounds awesome, will you polish my toe nails too? please
Love it dear!

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2 posted 2002-04-02 10:00 PM


Ah Noah!  Joanna is one lucky woman!  Wow!  You would do most anything for her...this is wonderful!  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-04-03 04:24 PM


A beautiful love letter Noah, that you have shared with all of us. ((((hugs)))) floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

[This message has been edited by strbbux (04-03-2002 04:25 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-04-03 05:55 PM


ENJOYED IT A LOT
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5 posted 2002-04-03 06:19 PM


Sweet one, I hope it all comes to pass as you hope.
Beautiful request for love and declaration of love.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-04-04 12:27 PM


This is beautiful, M'toe.... she's a very lucky lady! *S*
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7 posted 2002-04-04 12:31 PM


Lucky Joanna!
However, I think you better be a masseur

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-04-04 03:20 PM


Noah - so nice to read your writings once more, and I know that she does see. All she has to do is read the poetry you write for her...

BC

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