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Changing To The Key Of C Major
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Changing To The Key Of C Major |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Changing To The Key Of C Major it was just a sad lullaby you wished someone else would sing not the kind of song you thought your life would bring by now you thought the tune would sound so clear and so sweet but all the keys you played in crumbled into flats at your feet as the music now starts over a different key of a life’s song the very things that made it weak help to heal and make it strong and the notes don’t have to imitate any music you have ever heard before for some songs that can make you cry can also make your heart soar and no matter how long it takes you eventually do get over the pain and the rhythm of a life returns and that, is the song that remains |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
by now you thought the tune would sound so clear and so sweet but all the keys you played in crumbled into flats at your feet nicely expressive passage... I enjoyed the read..and the thoughts |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is sooooooo optimistic and lovely, sweet friend, I too always find my favorite songs always cheer me up when I am feeling down, for I love songs that reflect how I believe and feel and who I am and Shakira and Counting Crows especially make me feel happy! (kiss on cheek) This sings like music, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-02-2002 08:26 PM).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h, Certainly, there are songs left to be sung. I seem to be stuck in E-flat myself, but there are those who say that this is the key of the earth. Common ground. Nice write too, Lady . . . e |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You get an A for this Major piece I love it! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so true, and so well expressed. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it comes full circle doesn't it helen?? great work here. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I like this alot..life is a song and we have to dance to it the best we know how.. ~Victoria
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
B sharp and bumping |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very subtle, slick move... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - have been away for a while, just got back online and wanted to reply to this. I like the poem, the style, and still the way you write words... and no matter how long it takes you eventually do get over the pain and the rhythm of a life returns and that, is the song that remains "if a lifetime is taken and the pain does leave life does return, but slowly but the heart will sing..." BC |
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