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She Dreams at Night : A Gloom Sonnet
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She Dreams at Night : A Gloom Sonnet |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
She dreams of white knights in shining armor, A man of true sight and lasting valor, To rescue and to carry her away Nobel fighter that always saves the day. Dream lover please don’t fade in the waking. She dreams of a house with white picket fence, A garden where butterflies lightly dance, A husband true and children of laughter, Home to live happily ever after. Dream cottage please don’t fade in the waking. She woke finding she was again alone, In the dirty alley she had made home, Her dreams now replaced by reality, A day to roam till tonight’s fantasy. Gloom |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
even though this is sad, it's something I think folks can relate to....I like this style of sonnet. very cool. Is that something you did on your own or is that a way of doing sonnets?!  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Sea, This is my own style of sonnet, One that I work with occasionally, I’m pleased you like it. The main feature is the repeating lines, Or very similar lines, which tend to bind the three stanzas. Gloom |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well I like it very much,. I might have to play with it a bit....if you don't mind??? and thanks for letting me know |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to everyone who lives in this lifestyle and I hope they can find peace and hope out of the gloom! (sigh) This is so very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you1 Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well done! We should all have dreams - though they don't have a chance of coming true.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Prof I enjoyed this look at dreams perhaps impossible, and the sadness of someone's reality. You write well! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow, a gloom sonnet, this is wonderful. Too bad it had to end like that, I would have loved to see her be happy and taken care of. But then that wouldnt be a gloom sonnet would it. HAHAHAH great work gloom. loved it. floria Floria |
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