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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“NOT KNOWING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Many thoughts on my mind, like all this is abandoning… Feelings I have inside me, emptiness of not knowing… I’m sure you’ve had the pain, of wondering about it all… Heart weeping, not showing, like being against a wall… What to do next, or how, stay, or leave, or don’t care… Needing someone to embrace, someone to love, anywhere… Many thoughts on my mind, like all this is abandoning… Feelings I have inside me, emptiness of not knowing… ~~~~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow Bill, do you know how powerfully sad this is? I have a son in this predicament, divorced, and so so tired of being alone, and so depressed, Every time I read a poem like this I think of him.There are many in those shoes Bill. But what I tell him, I tell you. You have no idea what God has in store for you. So you have to just keep thinking positive and having faith. Loved this one. floria Floria |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BC~ "Feelings I have inside me, emptiness of not knowing…" I know this.... well done  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, How sad...time, you know it just takes time. Love sneaks up on us and it's better that way.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How you speak for so many....well done, Sir... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, A fine piece, well done. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I’m sure you’ve had the pain, of wondering about it all… Heart weeping, not showing, like being against a wall… I know this feeling well, Bill.... You have expressed it beautifully.  ~lots of hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggggsssss) Oh Bill, I know this kind of yearning so very well, where I just want to know how's it going to be and if everyone will turn out in the end and how I feel empty wanting to have a love story with a happy ending! (sigh) This is beautifully sensitive and heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm hugs)))) Words from the heart, many can relate. Hope that days will be better soon. Charisma |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...Another excellent write. I certainly could identify with your well expressed inner thoughts. Love and the loss of it...is so lonely because no one can be in your shoes. Thank-you for baring your soul; because it's a comfort knowing someone else has felt what you've felt before. Hope love finds you again, Bill. ***Ivy Rose |
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