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A Grief Remembered
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A Grief Remembered |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA 
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A Grief Remembered Stupefying loss Inane smile on face of grief Shock reverberates Inspiration gone Words fail, inexpressible Inarticulate Irreplaceable Acknowledging sorrow Inconsolable Shenachie 3 April 2002 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So many feeling in a small compact poem.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Louise I felt all of these things following the loss of my father to asbestos cancer. Even now there are times when the grief sometimes washes over me when I lease expect it. Your words said so much. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderfully penned! Enjoyed much tonight. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Louise, this is soooooo powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your sorrow, I know this kind of pain so very well too and I pray that now you have healed and this grief has been overshadowed by a new hope! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Louise, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
perfectly described.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bridget I'm sorry you know these feelings, I do too. You write it well. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I truly enjoy your writing...some things can be counted on! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In bluest of rooms grief remembered and then shared warmth found in console |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
heart wrenched penned....like it very much! (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
consolatory sympathetic affections lovingly proffered Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
My thanks to all of you for reading and commenting. Magnus, some feelings we just keep trying to understand and heal. It helps to express what we can when we can. Thanks for commenting. Sue, I think that you inspired me to get on with my grief work. Your postings show what marvelous progress you have made in your writing while dealing with your own grief. Nancy, thanks for reading and commenting. It helps to know that my writing is comprehensible when I'm writing about feelings that were once a muddle of confusion. Hi, Sweet Noah! Thanks for commenting. And yes, I am out of the deep grief. You are dear to care. Balladeer, you're very kind. I am hoping that my descriptions become better and my writing develops a flow of clarity. Your postings are so smooth and polished. So suave! Martie, thanks for commenting. Your remark was sweet and it just tells me that this is how we develop compassion and wisdom. Duncan, I enjoy your poems as well. Thanks for reading and commenting. In fact, I look for your poems. I'm still overwhelmed at all the poetry in this site and doing a lot of catch up reading. Sunshine, boy am I blessed with you! Loved your reply. I just can't stop thanking you for introducing me to these pages and all these wonderful people. Charisma, I'm glad that you liked it and I appreciated the hug. Interloper, what a lovely reply and so true of you and all the people who commented. Thanks! Shenachie |
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