Open Poetry #19 |
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Hanging Clothes (one more mountain joy) |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho ![]() |
There’s a loveliness in reaching up amidst blushing colors, sweet scented sheets whipping strongly southwest, pinning together cloth flower bouquets; planting instant blowing gardens in exhilarated spring gales. I still love the feel of my long hair blowing tangle-wild on bright warm windy mountain afternoons, lugging cumbersome baskets to fasten freshly washed clothes on the seventy-one foot line strung pine to pine behind the house; squinting up, dodging the brilliant sun, straw hat’s drawstring tugging at my neck, cool dampness flapping in my flushed face. There’s an élan in heavy winter quilts jerking out of my hands, flying straight out, too high to touch, as though yearning to reach the streaming clouds. And a reminiscence in meeting that happy child again, forty years back, me, hanging clothes with my mother; a sunny memory fastening us both together forever. The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing with such harmony and joy! (kiss on cheek) May the bliss of youth and memories always fill your heart and be hung up to dry in the clotheslines of your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rosemary, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ 'pinning together cloth flower bouquets; planting instant blowing gardens in exhilarated spring gales.' I don't believe I've EVER read such joy~ This is replete with imagery as only you could give me to view~ I simply adore it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! This is GR8! I love your imagery and the weaving of thoughts ![]() Well done, indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The memories are beautiful, and the way you wrote them. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a beautiful poem, Rosemary "a sunny memory fastening us both together forever." nice warmth here *s M |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! love it ![]() Charisma |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
And a reminiscence in meeting that happy child again, forty years back, me, hanging clothes with my mother; a sunny memory fastening us both together forever. Yes and that is a lovely memory..i havent hung clothes outside for a long time since my children have grown..but they do smell so fresh don't they in the wind..loved this Rosemary..enjoyed alot ![]() ~Victoria |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
What a wonderful, brilliant piece of work. And the pictures and memories it conjured up in my head left me feeling the wind blow through my hair. "lugging cumbersome baskets to fasten freshly washed clothes on the seventy-one foot line strung pine to pine behind the house;" How I remember doing this with my Grammy at her summer home near the ocean so many, many years ago. She had a washboard and would let me help scrub the sheets and then hang them on the line. I can still remember that wonderful smell as I crawled into bed at night on sheets so stiff they could rip your skin off, but smelling of ocean's mist, pine and fresh air. Bravo to you and thank you for a memory buried and brought forth again. Hugs, Marti ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ooops, my apologies to you Rosemary and to Marge. Marge sent me a copy of your poem and suggested I read it and when I replied to you, it showed up with her name. How do I fix that anyway? Gosh, this is so confusing....Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well Honey, Not exactly my cup of tea, but I sure loved the part about mother. She sure means so much to me. Love Dale |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I love imagery in poems..this one paints such a happy picture so clearly. Thank you for sharing it with us. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love ya Rosemary Oh, and I also loved the poem, Reminds me of my childhhod So sweetly written Hugs Liz |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The imagery is so beautiful. Thank you for a beautiful read...*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm so glad Marge sent me the link for this... I would have hated to miss this beauty! *S* Some of my earliest memories are playing in the yard under the clotheslines... using the freshly washed clothes for shade... and hiding places. *S* Later on, I felt so grown up when I got to hang out the towels... but yup... they dried rough! LOL Wonderful write, Rosemary... thanks for the trip down memory lane. *S* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary You touched a memory with me...with your close line, of my mother and the back yard..and the sheets fresh from the sun to sleep in that night. Thank you for such a lovely picture! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Rosemary, you make wash day sound like it is a joy to do. How wonderful this was, I also remember my mother when i do certain chores. But washday seems so special, especially the smell of the fresh laundry after it has hung out all day. Wow you did a fantastic job on this one, I love it, your hair blowing in the wind. Oh I just love it. Bravo. floria Floria |
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