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Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-04-03 08:16 PM

You Left A Note
Note challenge
between Krissy and I

Letters of fire written in flame
Spell out heat with desire’s name
A note of love left here for me
To stir with desire a memory

Letters written with delight
Summon me again to night
Take me into the flames again
Sing with me fire’s refrain

A simple note recalls this
The memory of fire’s kiss
Passion that flames in my soul
Completing me now I’m whole

Words inscribed by your pen
Spin me into space and then
Fill me with fire’s heat
Speedy call of pulses beat

Paper touched by your lips
Caressed it with your fingertips
As your lips and hand do me
Call back fire instantly

A note written just for me
Etched into my heart eternally
No words of mine can reply
Actions speak come let’s fly

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-03 08:20 PM

Briefer and briefer, saying more and more...

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-04-03 09:02 PM

Meet ya at the ink well Marsha....
This is great!
ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-03 09:35 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this sounds like a fun challenge, sweet friend, you write a true note of love with the gorgeous words you always write! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2002-04-03 11:24 PM

I'll make a note of it!! Nicely penned, mushy one

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-04-04 05:14 AM

Wow, did the words just jump from the page and set fire to my heart...I think so.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-04-04 08:22 AM

Marsha, you write with fiery words of boiling honey. Wonderfully penned! I'll send you my response to your challenge, shortly.

((Marsha))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-04-04 04:10 PM

Marsha - very nicely done, less words, more meaning. I like the new style from you...

BC

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-04-04 05:18 PM

Good thing I have an asbestos mouse pad

HOT stuff

I love it!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-04-04 07:46 PM

Wow all this in a little note. and I just read Newells reply to this. You have got everyone going on here Marsha..hahaha this is truly nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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