Of Love, These Notes (Marsha's Challenge)

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Open Poetry #19

Of Love, These Notes (Marsha's Challenge)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-04-03 10:54 PM

Courtship of the distance
So many miles away
And for a time decided
Much better off this way

A writer not my love so sweet
His voice my fire, his thoughts my fleet
And for a time we dance in tune
Two stars play tag around the moon

Creative romance done by two
So many miles a lifetime through
And stirred as much I miss him so
New ways of love we teach and know

A writer not, my love so sweet
His voice my fire, his pulse my beat
And for this time just as we play
For now much better off this way

Copyright Kkh 4/3/02

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (04-03-2002 10:59 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-04-03 10:56 PM

Beautiful words and excellent flow to it!

Nicely done TD

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2002-04-03 11:01 PM

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading this....what a wonderful cadence and rythym, not to mention fantastic wording. Bravo!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-03 11:18 PM

"A writer not my love so sweet
His voice my fire, his thoughts my fleet
And for a time we dance in tune
Two stars play tag around the moon"

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this poem is sooooooo lovely and adorable, I had that thought of stars chasing each other around the moon reading this, this is soooooo cute! (kiss on cheek) This is a fabulous reply to the challenge, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-04-04 08:28 AM

ThisDiamond,
you shine...just like your poetry.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-04-04 08:33 AM

Diamond,
If I were marking you I'd say A+

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