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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
No Ending Written The cold still grips this land I know it thaws just like these memories a fading crystal, a stranger’s soul but time has rot its frailties Where are you my guiding light? that wanton spirit of beggars love the muse of heart, my storm held kite the kiss, the laugh… my summers dove The embers of this fire grows the night, the night… the lonely night and sleep sings whispers in the cold in gusty feathers of frozen whites I fade from here to futures unknown where spirits thrive on gifts of hope no endings written, no plot is known a tireless searcher, for a heart of gold. James Parker Haley Mar 25, 2002 |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Sartre would affirm the opinion of no beggining nor end. And yet you clearly elucidate hope exists. That must be a wonderful gift- hope. Thank you for sharing your insight. "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Park, any comment I can think of to put after this seems inadequate. So lets just say 'I read and enjoyed it'  D I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Read, enjoyed, and Kept... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where are you my guiding light? that wanton spirit of beggars love the muse of heart, my storm held kite the kiss, the laugh my summers dove The embers of this fire grows the night, the night the lonely night and sleep sings whispers in the cold in gusty feathers of frozen whites ===================================== P-man, this is exquisite writing... what an achingly beautiful piece this is... and your cadence is poetry in motion, it was melodic when read aloud. If I were truly a poet...Id write you a happy ending  but since you are (a poet) and "a tireless searcher" I know you are going to write the perfect ending and hang the moon when you do. Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Parker Very beautifully expressed, this search. [This message has been edited by Martie (03-25-2002 04:05 PM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hello Handsome this is definately one I wish I could hear you read (ok, all of yours I want to hear you read ) but this reads so nice out loud! It's wonderful |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Whew! dayum im floored! I love your style! My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Parker, this is exquisitely written, full of such emotion...beautiful in both rhyme and cadence, the meter is perfect. i read this two times the second time loving it even more than the first...as for your ending im sure it will be nothing short of fantastic! wonderful write! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks all for your replies, they always mean much to me. My muse seems to be on vacation lately... I need some inspiration... Janet, Dee, and SEA got a few hours.... Parker |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A modern Sophocles perhaps Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Park, I have lots of time to spare......you know where to find me D I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
DEE...SEA...& ME? Well, I like a man who sets high expectations for himself Darlin....youre gonna need oxygen ROFL |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sigh - another heart rendering poem, Park. Have you not heard, it's the journey not the ending that counts? Ah, well, hope this is based on fiction and the facts are much brighter. Cor |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Interloper thanks. Dee, thanks come visit. Janet, oxygen who needs it I can hold my breath for a long time. Corinne, well true but the hunter can only hunt for so long before he starves... but sometimes the small game can be very tasty... Parker |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Handsome, I'd need weeks  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this poem sounded like someones search for something more, some dream that he yearns to achieve! (big hugggssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Parker, thank you for this exquisite read I've come across here2nite... *~coco~* |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Very cool write here! Very creative! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, I got weeks... Noah, thanks as always. Coco, thank you sweet poet. Saunni, thank you for the reply. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sorry i missed this one when it was on top..very nice write parker..your poet is a good soul..and what a poet he is.... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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