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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-04-03 07:05 PM

My life, yours for the moment.
Cherished thoughts shared by both.
My love, deeply given and felt
Lasting in a heart from love’s trust.

Hope, joy, confidence and courage
Tears, happiness, endearing thoughts.
Love...true and unconditionally given
Felt by one, from one, everlasting.

Words flowing like a leaf in a stream.
Following the heart, chasing a dream.
Words felt within two souls wandering
Kept treasured, locked up, eternally.

Though the heart beats heavy, I smile..
For I have given to one a feeling, a gift
One so awesome and never experienced..
The feeling of true, unconditional love...

Given from my heartfelt deepest love
To an angel, flying free, so high above.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-03 07:08 PM

What a magnificent gift!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-04-03 07:26 PM

This is wonderful Barry, is it for your mother? I am assuming it is. and I love these lines.

"Given from my heartfelt deepest love
To an angel, flying free, so high above"

Just beautiful and from the heart. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

3 posted 2002-04-03 07:40 PM

Magnus Hi there this is an amazing poem, the presentation the language usage all combine to make this excellent. Wonderful gift you are a very good poet

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-04-03 08:13 PM

Barry, a most wonderful gift!
Hugs, Nancy...now up from the dungeon.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2002-04-04 01:02 PM

I don't think there's a greater gift to be given than unconditional love... for it asks nothing more than to be allowed existence. *S* This is beautiful, Magnus.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-04-04 05:25 PM

Barry - your words are to be cherished in this write. Great write...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-04-04 05:48 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous and dazzling, sweet friend, I too am always humbled and gifted by this kind of love I see too and somehow I just can never believe it, though I know such a joy exists! (big hugggsssss) This is dazzling, your heart soars with poetic wings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-04-04 06:49 PM

enjoyed

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