Revisiting an Old Promise (a simple poem of reassurance)

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Open Poetry #19

Revisiting an Old Promise (a simple poem of reassurance)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-04-03 05:17 PM

There are no words that can be proof
that my love for you is solid
no matter how much I try chasing it away.
The time we share has been shorter
and I know you are getting a glimpse of doubts.
I could put this in a letter
seal it up
send it to your wondering eyes
but it wouldn't hold the power it holds right here before your eyes
in your favorite place.
I still love you
simply that
and no time away could cause an ending to that
for I am finished passing up what I truly want
and if it takes me a lifetime to have you completely
I'll spend every day of it thinking of ways
I can love you more.
being in your arms, kiss to kiss with you
those are just extras according to what we have.
I have your heart's devotion
as you have mine,
and all the other world's obstacles be damned.
I will love you
even when
(if?)
you give up on me.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-03 05:25 PM

(smiles) This is soooooo very beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, and I hope that this love you fel lasts forever and he can promise you heaven always as well! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

2 posted 2002-04-03 06:02 PM

There is none that would give you up after reading this. This should be all the assurance anyone needs.

Wonderful. Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-04-04 10:59 AM

how can one give up
when you hve given your all
if one loves you too

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

4 posted 2002-04-04 11:46 AM

"I still love you
simply that..."
well put.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-04-04 03:23 PM

this is from a place that only a few know. . . and from a feeling that won't go away. . .

moving. . . and heartfelt my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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