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Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-04-02 11:23 PM



        

Sunflower Delight
Haiku

Standing tall with pride
oh glorious sunflower
for my eyes delight

By Melissa P. Monette

        

A Stretch Of Sunflower
Haiku

Gentle raindrops fall
sunflowers stretch for a sip
of nature's nectar

By Melissa P. Monette



Sunflower Salute
Haiku

In butter gold crown
take a bow, your majesty
as the breeze applauds

By Melissa P. Monette




[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (04-02-2002 11:29 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-02 11:31 PM


Melissa!!! How did u know that sunflowers are my favorite flower?! This is gorgeous and going right into my library!

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2 posted 2002-04-02 11:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, sunflowers are one of my favorite flowers too, your gorgeous words depict them so wonderfully! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friedn, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bridget Shenachie
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3 posted 2002-04-02 11:50 PM


Excellent, Melissa!

Kansas is the Sunflower State.  

Great haiku and much appreciated.



Shenachie

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4 posted 2002-04-03 03:44 AM


Beautiful!!!      I love Haikus and these are great

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Charisma
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5 posted 2002-04-04 07:59 AM


Bravo

love these haikus

((hugs))
Charisma

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6 posted 2002-04-04 08:35 AM


Melissa,
Lovely, lovely, lovely.

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7 posted 2002-04-04 03:49 PM


wonderful Melissa!!!

you are indeed one of the best at this form. . . great work. . .

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8 posted 2002-04-04 04:59 PM


oh those flower pots are adorable..they must be Anne Geddes work...as i have quite a few of her baby pictures in my house..anyway your haikus were absolutely lovely...hugsss

                 ~Victoria

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9 posted 2002-04-04 05:04 PM


I, too, applaud you and the use of my favorite form

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10 posted 2002-04-04 07:50 PM


Melissa, I cannot pick out a favorite. I love them all. wonderful work. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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11 posted 2002-04-04 07:57 PM



I think I'll have you submit these to the Kansas Arts & Appreciation Committee...I don't think they've seen such a fine job of poetic acknowledgment of our state flower for some time...

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12 posted 2002-04-05 09:02 PM


missy,

these are delightful!
and yes, I know how much
you love sunflowers, you
bring them to life well

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