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Red Hot (2 tankas) |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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You are far too hot And you seep through my sunblock Til I'm raw and red Should have tried a tanning bed but here I suffer instead Red lobster I am Fried by sun, battered by sand I cannot cool off It hurts to even touch soft To again burn and not learn |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (soft hugs) Awwwwwwww, I'm so sorry you got so sunburnt, sweet Joanna, I too know this kind of uncomfort but I promise in a few days it will heal and you will feel comfortable again, just keeping trying that aloe vera gel! (kisses) I love you, my love, these are wonderful tankas! (kiss on lips)  Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Joanna~ OUCH!! too many summers spent in the Sun...be careful....HUGSSS to you, if it doesnt hurt to badly...  Lauren~ Step through the |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Joanna! Loved these sweetie! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Joanna, Those tan lines are hard to get rid of! LOL  |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 Nicely done, my friend.  Oh, damn, sorry! ~ Titus "Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loved he heat in this RP! Better get you some solarcaine girl! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I hate to get burned on my back and then it starts itching...maddening I tell you...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
like it, but hope you take care next time. Charisma |
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