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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-04-04 10:07 AM

Word Dancer
~*Marge Tindal*~

Twirling
Soft pirouette
Dancing on words
She hasn't yet met
Curtsey low in marabou
Rapture of feathering flow
Two-step down the dictionary
Illumed in dance of cranberry
Words upon the page replete
Kept in time-rhythmic beat
Air of flair in ruffling
Dance of words
Foreverly~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-04-04 10:10 AM

Marge,
If you said it I like it.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-04-04 10:11 AM

I love how you do what you do

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2002-04-04 10:11 AM

yes... foreverly...

Regards, Marge,
Sudhir

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-04-04 10:25 AM

May I have the next dance

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2002-04-04 10:31 AM

Wonderfully written, Marge.
So very descriptive

Love it muchly~ hehe

Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-04-04 10:38 AM

Two step or foxtrot
it doesn't matter
waltz or dosie-do
keep the words
no matter
where you go!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-04-04 11:29 AM

Ahhhh, you all are so cool~
Just playing in the dictionary this morning and found a little inspire~
Happy to share it with friends~

Thank you all~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

*InterLoper ... you're on !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-04-04 12:40 PM

Marge: This was probably written with a female dancer in mind but I could see flamingos! Beautiful either way.

Betty Lou Hebert

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-04-04 01:59 PM

Marge~

I love how this sounds....

Dance of words
Foreverly~

its just peaceful...HUGSSS...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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