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a poem to chase [the good bad and funny of reminisce] great fun...
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a poem to chase [the good bad and funny of reminisce] great fun... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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no time to waste there’s a poem to chase will it have pizzaz should I give it taste should it be about someone that loves me or about something I just don’t believe fifty two years from the day I was born through sheets of pain of sleet and storm down in the dale a train blows its horn over fields of sweet barley and corn how ‘bout that girl in summer’s sunrise the one with the smile and gleam in her eye she sure made this sole spring alive I was a fire back then torching the sky down at the bus stop bidin' my time I saw my girl kissing a friend of mine I became one real bad loser so instead of lovin’ I became a user she was the girl with spring in her hair her voice was a song I thought she was fair she was the one I felt that loved me now love is somethin' I never believe wake up kid time to get on your toes you haven’t the time to sit and doze grab your bag and a few old clothes stick out your thumb and hit the road now isn’t this one a real disgrace this is an aweful waste of space there just must be another poem to chase 2002/03/25 02:45 PM Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (04-02-2002 03:07 PM).] |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I like this one! I think it's very cute! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ LOL ... and just what chaser are you using ? You're a trip and a half ! And I love traveling through your thoughts~ Now ... ready for another ?  Make that a double ! ! Hi Rosemary  *Hugs* to the folks from the fir-lined study~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This was a real cute read Lucky.. i liked the line the girl with spring in her hair nicely done ~Victoria |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Can I have a gin and tonic with that chaser. smooth poem Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much, lucky. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale You are a hoot! That's a good thing! |
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