Open Poetry #19 |
When The Moon Spreads Her Wings |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
When The Moon Spreads Her Wings By: Noah Eaton 4/1/02 Every night before I fall asleep I tuck my blankets to my neck, all over me It feels like your warm body holding me I lay there thinking "If I could hold you for real!" Then I wouldn't ever again have to face insomnia I can feel your hand in mine, keeping me company And look out the window, I can see the moon rise like a phoenix Spreading her wings out, siling to us like a snow owl Every day the summer is getting closer I can feel you growing ever nearer And deep down I know You love me And soon I know we will see Between you and me The moon will spread loves wings I go about my business with your picture in mind As long as we're together, I feel alright All I need now is this stillness of heart to find me You are like canteloupe at breakfast, you taste so sweet My sun has always been an albatross Frozen in yearning, my hearts castle is like greenware Now together we'll sit at the potter wheel of life Kneading loves sweet dreams, you are my hearts wife Every day the summer is getting closer I can feel you growing ever nearer And deep down I know You love me And soon I know we will see Between you and me The moon will spread loves wings My heart is not frozen, it's just leather hard All I need is your kiss to make it an ocean to your heart I believe we can go the distance, I know there is a way Destiny will embrace us some day I stay up till 10 listening to Latin music Staring at your pictures, I still feel lovesick It's hard to rest my eyes with the flickering moonlight I dream of holding you and kissing you at nighttime All I want is to hear you breathing See you cry, feel your body, hear you laughing To see your smile and love you forever Is all I want, more than ever Every day the summer is getting closer I can feel you growing ever nearer And deep down I know You love me And soon I know we will see Between you and me The moon will spread loves wings I know we are meant to be The moon will spread loves wings [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-01-2002 10:26 PM).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Noah, this is absolutely beautiful! You sure have a way with words and as always you have so much to say from that loving heart of yours. Great write. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My heart is not frozen, it's just leather hard All I need is your kiss to make it an ocean to your heart You're one romantic heart and your poetry does have wings all their own! Lovely poem Noah~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah, your words sing!! I love this |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Noah!!!! I absolutely ADORE this poem... it has to be one of your finest. And I do believe you are in love!!!! I can see it in every longing, hopeful word you have written here. And I do know how you are feeling right now... waiting is the hardest part... but it is well worth the wait. Love always is. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...The moon will spread love's wings. This is my favorite line, the mystery and the majesty. Beautiful work Noah. ThisDiamond |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Every day the summer is getting closer I can feel you growing ever nearer And deep down I know You love me And soon I know we will see Between you and me The moon will spread loves wings Gorgeous Noah...love reading your romantic poetry hon...beautifully written from your warm heart as always ~Victoria |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yes, wonderfully romantic... great work, Noah... Regards, sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwww what a beautiful song of heart. Love and warmth within. another amazing piece from your hand Noah...well done!!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful, Noah. I know that summer is going to be a fine season for you this year! Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, the moon WILL spread it's wings Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noah~ This is just amazing.... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah Your words flow so freely from your loving heart. You always write so beautifully of love and longing. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Such purity of love you offer my friend...It will come Noah..it will come. |
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